Showing posts with label 2006. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2006. Show all posts

Thursday

Gabriel’s Groundhog Day (2006)



Sean Kerr: 4 blinking lights and a telephone (Window)

Gabriel's Groundhog Day


“I’m both! I’m a celebrity in an emergency …”

This is my launch speech for the screening of Gabriel White's new film (see further details here):


There’s a scene in the movie Groundhog Day where the cameraman Larry is trying to pick up a girl at a party. “People think that I just point my camera at stuff, but there’s a heck of a lot more to it than that!” She’s clearly unimpressed, and makes a hasty excuse to get away before he even gets to show her the inside of his van.

I guess the first point to make about Gabriel’s work generally, but especially his new film Aucklantis, is that there’s a heck of a lot more to it than meets the eye. Yes, on the surface it’s all very simple. He walks along the street, filming himself, and talking. Sometimes he does the washing-up while he’s talking. Sometimes he discusses where he’s going to put the camera.

This conciseness and economy of means is a mask, though. Gabriel has understood that the shortest distance between two points is a straight line. The remorselessly quotidian and ordinary nature of the things he films is designed to wake us up to the myriad strangenesses in the ways we react to the world around us.

I guess the most obvious analogy is with Joyce’s Ulysses (which he actually invokes at one point in the film you’re about to see). Again, the concept is simple: the events of one day in Dublin, seen through the eyes of a number of different characters, but patterned on the events and people of the Odyssey.

Joyce undercuts the bourgeois complacencies of provincial Dublin by setting them against the heroic intensity of Homer. Or does he? Perhaps he means to say that Leopold Bloom really is as much of a hero as his original, Odysseus.

Gabriel’s own model is Plato’s Atlantis – does he mean to satirise our lifestyle or simply examine it? That’s for you to decide. He certainly succeeds in making provincial Auckland seem as much of a battleground for the gods as Plato’s lost continent ever did.

I’d prefer to posit a connection with Groundhog Day, which is (I have to admit) one of my favourite films of all time. Phil (or Bill Murray) is forced to repeat the same day over and over again until he exhausts every possible way of living it. He ends up becoming a better person through sheer boredom and failure to discover anything else to do with his time.


“One of these days someone’s going to see me interviewing a groundhog and decide I don’t have a future …”
Gabriel, too, is bound to the beat between Freemans Bay and the City Centre. He, too, resolves to get all he can from it. But is it Gabriel the character or Gabriel the filmmaker I’m talking about? Is there a difference? In Groundhog Day the weatherman Phil is constantly paralleled with the groundhog Phil. Every day the groundhog is frightened by his own shadow, and so the endless winter goes on. Phil the character tries kidnapping his alter ego, singing its praises, abusing it – nothing works. When he stops acting like a kind of human groundhog himself, though, the enchantment is broken.

At one point in his own film Gabriel speculates that his shadow is spying on him through stealth technology. He’s getting the better of it, though, by watching it spy on him, and thus getting an angle on how he appears to it. He even acts up to it at times to give it interesting things to watch …

Groundhog Day required a cast of hundreds, a set of Hollywood Stars, finding a more photogenic small town to stand in for Punxsutawney, Philadelphia, and a few million dollars. Aucklantis succeeds in covering substantially more territory at a fraction of the cost by the simple application of wit and ingenuity.

It came as a great surprise to the makers of Groundhog Day when they started to get letters from rabbis and monks and religious leaders praising them for the wisdom of their film. It was, after all, just supposed to be another frothy Hollywood comedy. Gabriel’s film is funny, too, and one can read it on that level with no problems at all. Go deeper, though, and it’ll repay your scrutiny.

(2/12/06)

Window Online (13/2/06)
[Reprinted from: The Imaginary Museum (2/12/06)]

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Wednesday

for Leicester Hugo Kyle (2006)








Scott Hamilton, ed.: brief 34 - war (February 2007)

for Leicester Hugo Kyle, b.1937



Persistence of tussock
maxed-out Mastercard


Well, I’ve had some rather bad news. My friend Leicester Kyle is in extremis, with terminal cancer, at the Bone Marrow Unit of Christchurch Hospital. He’s elected to receive no further treatment for it, and his partner Carol circulated an email on the 18th of June warning his close friends and associates that he wasn’t long for this world.

As I write, a week later, they’re administering the Anglican last rites, or “final anointing.” David Howard – who was able to travel up from Dunedin to see Leicester one last time – just rang to tell me that, and also that he and I have been asked to be literary executors. I wish I could be there too. Writing this instead is, it seems, the best that I can do.


Barns raise rooftops
in reverse


Leicester’s wife Miriel died of cancer, too, a year or so after we first met. It was at a poetry workshop in 1997, actually – rather an auspicious day: the day I met Lee Dowrick and Stu Bagby, also. We’ve been friends and allies ever since.

The first Leicester I knew, then, was the Auckland Leicester – the man who invariably went along to Poetry Live on K Rd and sat there looking avuncular with his long white beard and broad-brimmed leather hat, before standing up to read some wry and witty verses to the assembled hipsters.


The scenic guard-rail’s

whited out


After Miriel’s death I asked him if there was anything I could do for him, anything at all to make things easier. He said that there was one thing, rather a trivial thing – if I were to organise a regular gathering of friends, perhaps weekly or fortnightly, to talk about poetry, that might be a nice distraction.

Accordingly Richard Taylor, Scott Hamilton, Leicester and I began a semi-regular series of meetings in the London Bar, punctuated by visits from the likes of Hamish Dewe, Michael Arnold, Miriam Bellard, Kirsty and Andrew McCully, as well as the boys from evasion (and, on one memorable occasion, Yves Harrison, who got into a bit of a fight with Scott over the former’s disruption of a Salt launch a few weeks before … the laws of libel prevent me from saying more about that distinctly unedifying scene …)

Those meetings still continue, at Galbraith’s tavern, under the nom-de-plume of the brief organising committee. Leicester got us onto a good thing.


Charming Creek
takes an awkward turn


Then Leicester left. He bought a house, sight unseen, in the tiny village of Millerton, in the hills above Westport, and drove off there in his red Land Rover. It seemed a bit of a leap in the dark. I felt quite worried about him at first. But when I heard he’d acquired a little cat called Cursor (because he kept pace with the lines every time you turned over a new page in a book), I thought he’d be all right. And he was.

I visited Leicester in Millerton three times. The first time, in 1998, I flew down for ten days. The second time was after escaping that vast melancholy mud hole called the Gathering at the turn of the millennium. The third time, a few years later, I drove over in a rental car with David Howard for a week or so.


A naked tap
for Miner’s Dark


The lines I’ve been quoting above are from a poem called “Tips on Stress from Seddonville” which I wrote during my first sojourn in Millerton. We drove over there to buy some coal, after trying rather unsuccessfully to dig some out of one of the exposed coal seams that criss-cross the region (it looked bona-fide enough, but belched out acrid smoke whenever we tried to burn it).

The Tavern is, it appears, quite famous. We had a beer there, and then tried to compose some poems in each other’s manner. After a while the proprietor came over and remarked that there were two types of weather in Seddonville – if you can’t see the hills, it’s raining; if you can see them, it’s about to rain. Then he turned on the rugby. No poetry-scribbling drifters for him!

This is the poem I wrote that day, called “Kylesque.” I’m sure it doesn’t do him justice, though it later appeared in one of Tony Chad’s anthologies under the title “City Face”, so it must have touched some kind of chord:


Told yesterday
I had a ‘city
face’

this morning
I spent
practising
before the glass

insouciant sneers
atrocious leers
insolent stares

till I noticed
the espresso
had gone
cold

(9/7/98)

[As “City Face” – Valley Micropress 1: 11 (1998) 6;
All Together Now! A Celebration of New Zealand Culture by 100 Poets,
ed. Tony Chad (Wellington: Valley Micropress, 2000) 85].

After a while, as Leicester became more and more of an iconic figure on the West Coast (mainly because of his intense involvement in the fight to save the local environment from strip mining), I began to feel that someone should compile an anthology of the various poems and tributes to him which had begun to appear all over the place. Virtually everyone who visited seemed to want to write a poem about Millerton and his strange, old-man-of-the-mountain role in the community.

Tony Chad, David Howard, Jeffrey Paparoa Holman, Jim Norcliffe are just some of the writers I know who went there and wanted to record something of the extraordinary nature of the place.

So what will I miss most about Leicester? His wry sense of humour, above all, I suppose. In the very last letter he wrote me, just six weeks ago, he offers one parting reflection: “it isn’t really true that the quality of a poem has anything much to do with the beauty of the reader” – a typically sly and offbeat reaction to my own moonings over girls.

Also, his unfailing courtesy. He was a gentleman in the deepest sense of the term. When I heard how ill he was, a couple of months ago, I sent him an advance copy of the Classic New Zealand Poets in Performance anthology that I’d edited for AUP with Jan Kemp. I thought he might like it, hearing again the voices of Curnow, Glover, Tuwhare and the rest reading their iconic poems. Even from a cancer ward he took the trouble to ring up and thank me.

I was out at the time, so he had to leave a message. Is it sentimental of me to have saved it, and to play it back again now? The voice is thin and breathless – a shadow of what he used to sound like – but it’s so recognisably him:

Message recorded Sunday June the 4th, 12.27 pm:

“Hello Jack, this is Leicester. Just ringing to thank you very much for the poetry book. I think it’s a real triumph. The poems are so well chosen, and it’s really good to read New Zealand poetry all keeping such good company. So very thoughtful of you, and I’m reading it with great pleasure. Bye.”

I guess that’s the last time I’ll hear his voice. There are a thousand more stories I could tell. Maybe I will tell some more of them later on, but for the moment I just want to put on record my love and respect for that wise and complex man – priest, poet, conservationist – the Reverend Leicester Kyle.


(27/6/06)

brief #34 (2006) – war: 6-11.
[Reprinted from: The Imaginary Museum (27/6/06)]

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brief 34 (2007)


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Tuesday

Death of the Old Gang (2006)



Alistair Paterson, ed.: Poetry NZ 33 (September 2006)

Death of the Old Gang

Sarah Broom, Contemporary British and Irish Poetry: An Introduction. Basingstoke & New York: Palgrave Macmillan, 2006.



There’s a scene in the 2003 film The Sleeping Dictionary where a newly-appointed British colonial officer is disconcerted to find a Dayak headhunter who can recite the names of the Kings and Queens of England. The two alternate rattling off the dreary list for quite some time until they get to Edward VIIII (it’s the Abdication year: 1936). “You left out Queen Anne,” remarks the headhunter. “You left out Stephen” is the young Oxonian’s terse response.

English poetry used to seem a bit like that: a set of clear-cut generations with their stars and also-rans. The twentieth century began with the Georgians (Brooke, Masefield, de la Mare), then the War poets (Graves, Sassoon, Owen), then the Modernists (Wyndham Lewis, T. S. Eliot, Pound), then the Leftist thirties (Auden, Spender, MacNeice), then the forties and the New Apocalypse (Dylan Thomas, Keith Douglas, Henry Treece), then the fifties and the Movement (Amis, Larkin, Wain), then the sixties and the Mersey Beat, then the seventies and … at about that stage the patterning ran dry. Who could make sense of the warring voices of the present? All those manifestos, slim volumes, blaring voices? What seemed certain was that at some crucial stage something had changed, the centre of gravity had shifted.

In New Zealand (about as far from literary London as a Dayak longhouse, I suppose) that shift was very clear. All of a sudden the literary gods lived in New York. American Modernism now ruled the roost. William Carlos Williams, Wallace Stevens, Robert Lowell had taken up the slack when the British faltered. One can observe the moment of change in the shift from 1950s Curnow (A Small Room with Large Windows) to 1970s Curnow (An Incorrigible Music).

It was, after all, a bit hard to get excited about post-fifties British poetry. There was Larkin whinging on about how miserable he was, and cataloguing the dreary appurtenances of what sounded like a used-up country. There was R. S. Thomas being grim and craggy. There was Geoffrey Hill being even grimmer and craggier. By contrast, there were the Americans, energetic, vital, sexy, humorous – New World. From the mid-sixties onwards America became the centre of the poetic universe (in English, at any rate).

And so the litany became: Williams and the Objectivists, Ginsberg and the Beats, Lowell and the confessional poets; then, in the 1980s, Ashbery and the L*A*N*G*U*A*G*E poets. As a result, we gradually lost sight of British poetry. The odd gleam shone out here and there: Seamus Heaney (but he was Irish), Douglas Dunn (a Scot), the odd wild man like Tom Raworth or Jeremy Prynne, but otherwise the visionary gleam seemed to have departed for good for more congenial climes.

But here comes Sarah Broom to set the record straight. Her book Contemporary British and Irish Poetry is designed specifically to answer the question “What happened then?” She concentrates on the poetry written over the last two decades in the British Isles and demonstrates, in the process, that the scene there is anything but moribund – on the contrary, that what is moribund is that old-fashioned recitation of schools and influences we memorised in English class. If the tangled, complex biosphere of Caribbean poets, feminist poets, gay poets, Irish & Scottish Nationalist poets, experimental and postmodern poets that constitutes contemporary Britain can’t be neatly summed up under one convenient label, then it’s time to junk the model.

“Death,” as Auden so succinctly put it, “of the Old Gang.”


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At this point in the argument, I have to declare an interest. I know Sarah Broom. In fact, she’s a friend of mine. More to the point, I’ve witnessed various parts of the long process of compiling her book.

Does this predispose me in her favour? I don’t honestly think so. I was quite prepared for this to be another disappointing piece of academic discourse about other people’s creativity, writing that makes no serious attempt to engage with a living audience.

Which is why it’s such a huge pleasure to be able to say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading Sarah’s book, and that I found it profoundly informative about a number of writers and movements I’d had the sketchiest ideas about previously.

[Insert: a seminar room at Massey University. Dr Sarah Broom is giving a seminar on modern Scottish poets’ responses to devolution; Jack (as honorary Scot – by virtue of descent and four years’ study at Edinburgh) has been deputed to read out various pieces of Glaswegian in his best “Eh Jummy!” voice. The faces around the table assume a polite rictus of disbelief as the appalling racket goes on – and on …]

Like so many other books of this type, it began as a Doctoral thesis. What is unusual about it is how much it has improved along the way: how much the long process of turning it into lectures and seminar papers, and then reassembling it into this “introduction for students” has clarified its lines of argument.

The secret to Sarah’s success, I think, is sympathy. A good defence attorney, she tries to make the strongest possible case for each of the representative poets she has chosen. There are 24 of them in all, divided into seven chapter-categories, so you can see that requires a good deal of tolerance.

My own personal lowpoint would be, I think, Eavan Boland (b.1944) whose musings on her own status in Irish life and letters include the stirring reflection that when the younger generation of Irish women writers try “to combine writing and parenting”:
I wrote like that once.
But this is different:
This time, when she looks up, I will be there
. [122]

I suppose that W. B. Yeats got a bit above himself at times – all those exhortations to Irish poets to “learn your trade, / Sing whatever is well-made” – but for sheer arrogant silliness this remark of Boland’s takes some beating.

What I admire about Sarah’s writing, though, is that she is content simply to present the bathetic posturing of Boland’s verse without feeling the need to put the boot in:
Come back to us
they [“the collective of Irish women through history”] said:
Trust me I whispered [121]

“It is tempting to read ‘Mother Ireland’ in this case as representing Boland herself,” is Sarah’s deadpan comment on this passage. This is, of course, a perilous critical strategy. If you allow ironic juxtaposition to convey your reservations about certain poetic approaches, there’s a risk that you’ll be read as wholeheartedly endorsing them.

Sarah clearly sees herself as more of an anthologist than a legislator, though, and her chief regret seems to be the number of poets she’s been forced to leave out for one reason or another (there’s a list of 29 of them in the preface, including such names as Tom Paulin, Derek Mahon, Paul Durcan and even Geoffrey Hill). It’s a measure of her success as a commentator that one does indeed regret not being able to hear her views on these writers. Certainly I finished each chapter of Sarah’s book feeling I’d learned something new, even about poets such as Heaney and Tony Harrison whom I’d been reading for years.

If Boland shows the perils of Sarah’s catholicity of taste, I feel her two chapters ‘a fusillade of question marks’ (about the Troubles in Northern Ireland), and ‘The Tribes of Poetry’ (about postmodern poetry in Britain) show its strengths.

Of course I’d heard of Peter Reading. I think I even owned a volume of his selected poems. It wasn’t till I read the discussion of him in Sarah’s final chapter, though, that I realised just how profoundly odd and interesting his poetic project actually was. My first act on finishing her book was, in fact, to order his collected poems on Amazon.com, and you can’t ask for a more ringing endorsement than that. She quoted just enough lines from Perduta gente (1989) his episodic narrative of London’s lost people, to make me realise that I needed to read it at once:
sometimes it seems like a terrible dream, in
which we are crouching
gagged. disregarded, unsought
in derries, dosshouses and spikes,
and from which we shall awake,

mostly, it seems, though, we won’t
. [249]

Reading’s curious mix of discordant subject-matter, technically precise verse and formal innovation was just too exciting to be ignored.

It’s not just a question of poetry, you see. I was there. I lived in Britain in the late 80s. Edinburgh is, admittedly, a much harsher place for the homeless than London (you either migrate south or die when winter begins – and it seems to last at least nine months a year). They were always there, though – on the borders of our vision. I remember one man joining in our philosophical discussion on the steps of the university library before, with elaborate periphrasis, making the inevitable demand for change. I also recall a friend of mine describing a couple she’d seen walking down the Grassmarket who were smiling as if proud of their brand-new status. Their clothes, she said, were still shiny and new, as if they’d just walked out of the old life that day.

It was a world where farmers proudly turned their livestock into cannibals, where Thatcher’s ministers took the concept of “plausible deniability” (i.e. lies) to a whole new level. It was the time of the poll tax, where Scotland had become a laboratory for testing out ideas too extreme even for the English. Reading’s book, then, for me, is as much a palimpsest of memories and impressions as a Dantesque charting of the lower depths. What is certain is that its inner seriousness utterly exposes the hollowness of so much of what so facilely passes for poetry nowadays.

I suppose that’s also my attraction to Sarah’s chapter on Northern Ireland. For once a set of modern poets came face to face to with the real thing: a real live civil war, with snipers, bombs, and oppressive occupiers. In the age of television, the violence suddenly erupted off the screen. The discussion here of Seamus Heaney’s approach to the victims of the troubles, his perhaps too-ready tendency to see them as martyrs, sacrificing themselves for the community like the neolithic Tollund man, is subtle and illuminating The real surprise for me, though, was the next poet she discusses, Michael Longley.
And when they had dragged Melanthios’s corpse into the haggard
And cut off his nose and ears and cock and balls, a dog’s dinner,
Odysseus, seeing the need for whitewash and disinfectant,
Fumigated the house and the outhouse
… [159]

In these lines from Gorse Fires (1991), Longley unpacks a little of the sickening violence which has always been basic to European culture. The analogy with the events of his own lifetime is clear:
He collapsed beside his carpet-slippers
Without a murmur, shot through the head
By a shivering boy who wandered in
Before they could turn the television down
Or tidy away the supper dishes.
To the children, to a bewildered wife,
I think ‘Sorry Missus’ was what he said
. [155]


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Eugenio Montale, a man of singular integrity, who managed somehow to live through the Fascist era, the second world war, the boom, even the Dolce Vita, wrote in “A Poet”:

I hope
I shall have some way to dedicate my poor songs
to the next tyrant …
He will be eager for spontaneous praise
gushing from a grateful heart
and he’ll have it, in abundance.
At the same time I’ll be able to leave
a lasting mark. In poetry
what counts is not the Content,
it’s the Form
.
[trans. Kendrick Smithyman]

Is that correct? Is that what counts, not the content but the form? I was having an argument about it (or rather, a discussion – we didn’t actually come to blows) the other day at a dinner-party. My interlocutor quoted from a radio interview he’d just heard with the Booker prize-winning novelist John Banville, who said that when he sat down to write The Sea he’d done so with the deliberate intention of producing a work of art. It was technique alone, apparently, that counted.

Far be it from me to judge John Banville or his book. I haven’t read it. It clearly pleased a number of competent judges, or it wouldn’t have won the prize. The question is, will we still want to read it in twenty years time? fifty years? a hundred? That, it seems to me, is more a question of content than form.

Sarah Broom’s book offers a window on a number of poets whom I’m sure we’ll be reading for the rest of this century, but also a number we won’t. If the fag-end of the twentieth century has told us anything, it’s that ironic detachment generates very little heat. You can idle an engine only so long before it stalls. For me the most memorable poems / poets in this volume are the ones who engage most fully with the external world around them.

Robert Lowell’s sonnet on Flaubert ended, originally, with a quote from the writer’s mother, who complained that “the mania for phrases dried his heart.” When he rewrote it, the new version ended: “Till the mania for phrases enlarged his heart.” That’s the paradox the best of these poets – the Readings, Heaneys., Longleys, Muldoons, Carsons – engage with: the search for a technique which can illuminate, not starve, the human heart. On the evidence of Sarah’s book, these few of them (at least) have been brilliantly successful.


(12-29/7/06)

Poetry NZ 33 (2006): 96-101.
[Available at: The Imaginary Museum (12/9/06)]

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Poetry NZ 33 (2006)


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Monday

Myth of the 21st Century: Introduction (2006)


Tina Shaw & Jack Ross, ed.: Myth of the 21st Century (2006)

Introduction

“When the legend becomes fact, print the legend.”



John Ford, dir.: The Man Who Shot Liberty Valance (1962)


In John Ford’s last great Western, The Man who Shot Liberty Valance (1962), the credit for shooting brutal outlaw Liberty Valance goes to the lawyer played by James Stewart, who is elected to the Senate as a result. The man who really shot him, John Wayne, is content to die in obscurity. When newspaperman Maxwell Scott digs up this fact he still prefers to “print the legend.” This, after all, is the Wild West. Some heroes are more necessary than others..

The first thing to say about myths, then, is that they cut both ways. One man is robbed of the recognition due to him; another becomes a success on the strength of something he never did. Myths can distort the truth or channel it. Jimmy Stewart, in the film, is a good man who does a lot of good things; John Wayne is a loner whose quiet heroism inspires none but his closest friends. As the Roman historian Sallust put it, “Myths are things that never happened, but that always are.”

In a recent NZ Herald column, Colin James suggested that “a society needs myths to hold it together. A nation is woven out of fictions, agreed from experience and from artists’ and writers’ imaginings drawn from that experience.” That is indeed the positive side of the picture – myths as shaping archetypes, agreed-upon fictions, essentially harmless ways of arranging an experience we all share but cannot easily express otherwise. If myths are lies, then they are, in C. S. Lewis’s words, “lies breathed through silver.”

This is a persuasive view, but it hardly does justice to the other side of the coin: myths as monstrously damaging illusions, concerted denials of the actual nature of things: the myths of male superiority, of racial purity, of the divinely-appointed mission. Nazi ideologue Alfred Rosenberg managed to wrap it all up in one convenient package in his notorious Myth of the Twentieth Century (1930), a comprehensive overview of the imaginary “Jewish world conspiracy” which somehow manages to tie in Bolshevism, cocktails, Jazz and anything else he and his National Socialist friends happened to disapprove of.

Are lies really the answer in a world where genocide has become not just possible but likely? Don’t we owe it to ourselves to try at all costs to tell the truth? Alfred Rosenberg, Julius Streicher and their apprentice Adolf Hitler managed between them to create a docile population which would act in defence of this bizarre belief-system, however deluded it may now seem to us. It’s hard to see any comparable peril in inculcating myths of Kiwi ingenuity, number-eight wire, and superiority in sport to the Australians, but perhaps it’s never safe to base your actions on convenient legends?

This anthology certainly can’t provide final answers to such weighty questions, but it’s interesting how often these same issues come up in the stories # local writers have sent us. Each of them was asked to speculate about the types of story likely to speak to us in the new age we’re entering. The invitation concluded:

If myths are, to quote Joseph Campbell, 'clues to the spiritual potentialities of human life', what clues will we actually need in the 21st century? What kinds of stories will we be telling?

Some of our authors, such as Patricia Grace and Charlotte Grimshaw, have chosen to emphasise the relevance of traditional Māori legends to the new conditions. These gentle retellings contrast with the violence of Mike Johnson and Tracey Slaughter’s recreation of Greek myths: Mike’s perfect incarnation of the godhead inspires at least one of those gazing upon her to tear out his own eyes in adoration; Tracey’s contemporary versions of the three Fates, Clotho, Lachesis and Atropos, are as cruel and fickle as the brittle consumer society they were born into.

Karlo Mila and Aaron Taouma, too, see Polynesian myths as at least partial solutions to the dilemmas of their characters: fear and violence, ever-present, can perhaps be shaped and domesticated if you can only find the right story to tell. Martin Edmond’s Baal, an idol who must be worshipped with blood and sex, enshrines a distinctly gloomier vision of the cosmos.

The same uneasy dualism seems to dominate the rest of the stories. Jack Ross’s bookish protagonist finds comfort in old books as his city crumbles under the rising tides of global warming – or is it merely one more excuse for inaction? Tina Shaw’s precariously civilised children trade the silver birds of their imagination for a flesh-and-blood carcase they can eat. Vivienne Plumb’s teasing versions of traditional fables and fairy-tales sum up the folly of living according to precedent in a world that needs new thinking.

Tim Corballis and Anthony McCarten, in very different ways, subject the myth-paradigm itself to close examination. McCarten dramatises the humorous possibilities of living in the future; Corballis dreams up a series of gentle parables to point up the paradox of the post-modern condition: we can never know enough to be sure of the consequences of our actions; unlike previous eras, however, we’ve lost even the hope of achieving such absolute knowledge.

Myths can be delightful and treacherous, comforting and maddening, wise and fatuous (in Tracey Slaughter’s words: “old, foreseeable, and necessary”). Like it or not, we’re never likely to be free of them, so it makes sense to inquire into their nature as often and as deeply as possible. If we want to have any hope of avoiding legends becoming facts, we’d better keep on printing them with annotations and a commentary.

If we writers, the licenced myth-spinners of society, don’t start that process, who will?


(16/10; 16-17/12/05)

Myth of the 21st Century: An Anthology of New Fiction. Edited by Tina Shaw & Jack Ross. ISBN 0-7900-1098-4. 137 pp. (Auckland: Reed Publishing (NZ) Ltd, 2006): 7-9.

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Myth of the 21st Century (2006)


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Sunday

Classic NZ Poets in Performance: Preface (2006)



Jack Ross, ed.: Classic New Zealand Poets in Performance (2006)

Preface


Alan Smythe & Jan Kemp working on the Waiata Archive (1974)


In 1974, the poet Jan Kemp, together with Alan Smythe and Dr Jonathan Lamb of Auckland University’s English Department, set out to collect sound recordings of as many as possible of New Zealand’s major poets. Of the 53 who eventually read for the project, 41 had poems selected for the set of three LPs published later that year: New Zealand Poets Read their Work (1 & 2) and New Zealand Poets Read their Work for Children. The reel-to-reel tapes of the original sessions were eventually donated to the Alexander Turnbull Library, where they have remained ever since.

In 2002, nearly thirty years on, Jan Kemp and Alan Smythe, then Acting-Director of the School of Creative and Performing Arts at Auckland University, decided to create a new, updated archive of spoken poetry. The plan was to set up regional collection centres in Auckland, Wellington, Christchurch and Dunedin in order to maximise coverage of the country’s poets. Jan Kemp took responsibility for Auckland, Elizabeth Alley for Wellington, David Howard and Morrin Rout for Christchurch, Richard Reeve and Nick Ascroft for Dunedin.

When it was eventually deposited in Auckland University’s Special Collections late in 2004, the Aotearoa New Zealand Poetry Sound Archive had grown to include 171 poets, each reading for approximately twenty minutes, collected onto 40 audio CDs, together with photos, texts, and bio-bibliographical materials in separate, complementary discs.

These two unrivalled collections of the country’s poets form the basis of the following collection. There are, of course, gaps. It’s regrettable (to mention just a few) that we have no recordings of Ursula Bethell or Robin Hyde. Ruth Dallas, too, unavailable to read in 1974, felt that she could no longer do justice to her own work when she was asked again in 2002. The most striking thing about both archives, though, is their immense inclusiveness.

The Waiata archive includes readings by many of New Zealand’s canonical poets, including James K. Baxter, Charles Brasch, A. R. D. Fairburn, Denis Glover, M. K. Joseph, and R. A. K. Mason. Most exciting of all, perhaps, is the opportunity to hear a voice in 1974 and then again thirty years later. The poets represented twice, in both archives, include many of our finest: Fleur Adcock, Alistair Te Ariki Campbell, Allen Curnow, Lauris Edmond, Riemke Ensing, Janet Frame, Kevin Ireland, Michael Jackson, Vincent O’Sullivan, Alistair Paterson, Kendrick Smithyman, C. K. Stead, Brian Turner, and Albert Wendt.

The task of selecting materials for this collection of Classic New Zealand Poets in Performance has therefore been more a matter of pruning back this embarras de richesse than of questing around for more.

We have tried to choose the poems according to a number of criteria:

  • Historical significance is one. It would be unthinkable to leave out, say, Glover’s “Magpies,” Curnow’s “Unhistoric Story” or Tuwhare’s “No ordinary sun,” even if one actually preferred other poems by those authors.
  • Representativeness is another. We’ve tried to display as much as possible of each author’s range of styles and voices (literally, in the case of those recorded both in 1974 and 2002).
  • Poetic merit is another, obviously far more subjective and difficult to assess. In general, we’ve gone for poems which seem to me concrete and clear, rather than those which exhibit an outdated sense of poetic rhetoric.

Limiting the time available to each poet might be seen as a constraint – alternatively, as an opportunity. My experience of many a long poetry reading has convinced me that the short, sharp shock can be more effective than the lingering half-hour performance. Our poets have roughly five minutes apiece to make an impression. Each of them, it seems to me, rises to the occasion supremely.

To facilitate the use of the collection, I’ve listed CD track numbers beside the text of each poem. Fuller bibliographical and recording details can be found in the track list at the end.

A decision was made at an early stage to be true to the poem as it was read, rather than as its author published it. All such variations between texts published elsewhere and the recorded version printed here have, however, been included in an appendix of Variant Readings.

Biographical and bibliographical information on each poet, together with a picture, can be found after their poems.
I moved monotonously with each altering swell
my rigid body drifting in small space
about the cold ridged ocean-moulded shell
till I lost hope of light: yet on my face
after drear days I felt again the sun
.

It’s intensely moving to hear R. A. K. Mason read these words of his, more than thirty years after his death. His voice sounds rough, vernacular, unstrained – almost as if he intends to undercut the lofty sentiments of the verse – but then it rises again to passionate conviction with that “after drear days I felt again the sun.” These, he seems to be saying, are true words, words to live by. I don’t know any other way to experience that.

This, then, is not so much a museum piece as a set of living voices recorded in their prime. The more I listen to them the more I learn. I hope you’ll feel the same way.



Jack Ross & Jan Riemenschneider Kemp
[AoNZPSA Launch, Gus Fisher Gallery (17 July, 2004)]



(16-19/7/05)

Classic New Zealand Poets in Performance (Auckland: Auckland University Press, 2006): ix-xi.

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Saturday

In Defence of Tracey Slaughter (2006)








Scott Hamilton, ed.: brief 33 - exile and home (March 2006)


Tracey Slaughter. Her Body Rises: Stories & Poems. Auckland: Random House, 2005. ISBN 1-86941-726-7. RRP $27.



Tracey Slaughter: Her Body Rises (2005)


I’ve just come up with a new acronym: BYTES – for “Bright Young Thing (Either Sex).”Tracey Slaughter is (or, rather, might be seen as being) a byte. She’s won a major literary competition (The Katherine Mansfield award, for her story “Wheat”); she’s had stories and poems in most of the major literary magazines (including a feature in Poetry NZ 25); and now a major publisher has put out her first book.

Unfortunately bytes tend to arouse a certain instinctive antagonism in (at least some of) their writing colleagues. These I would group into two major categories: BOGs – “Bitter Old Gits”; and JABBERs – “Jealous And Belligerent (But Equally-ranked) Rivals.”

Shortly after the publication of Tracey’s book, it received a write-up in the Listener which had to be seen to be believed. The reviewer, Paula Morris, criticised the following things:
  • The writing (“clunky sentences, wobbling points of view, and unnecessary tense changes”)
  • The structure of the writing (“Basic technical problems undermine many of the narratives”)
  • The clarity of the writing (“denseness of imagery often works against sense and clarity”)
  • The poetry (“feels a little stale”)
  • The stories (“very slight narratives, moments rather than satisfying stories … some …. feel abandoned, not finished”)
  • The characterisation in the stories (“Too many of Slaughter’s sensitive girls and desolate women feel interchangeable”)
  • The structure of the publication (“shuffling … two genres into unhappy proximity”)
  • The speed of publication (“rushing a book into print is no way to launch a career”)
  • The design (“fussy layout”)
  • The editing (“all suggesting a lack of editorial guidance”)

And apart from all that, how did you like the play, Mrs. Lincoln? Well, apparently there are some good things about the book. The award-winning story “Wheat” itself is an “atmospheric little tale that quivers with emotion” (the choice of the word “little” is a particularly fine touch – just in case all that praise went to the author’s head). What else? Oh, “Slaughter’s lyrical, often perceptive writing” is alluded to (once). Finally, it’s “smart” of Random House to “secure a relationship with her” (though it’s a little difficult to see why, given the “unpolished” nature of the work collected here).

Don’t get me wrong. Paula Morris has a perfect right to her opinion – and even to be harsh in expressing it, it seems to me. What really grates about the review is: 1/ its air of smug superiority, of pissing all over someone from a great height (“atmospheric little tale” – “quivers with emotion”); and 2/ the wholesale nature of the criticism. Virtually nothing escapes Morris’s machine-gun scatter of poisonous ink, including those things normally outside a writer’s control: the design, the hasty production, the very concept of putting out a book of stories and poems … It’s too much. At a certain point one simply stops believing that she feels indignant about all of those things.

I can’t say offhand whether Morris should be classed as a BOG or a JABBER – she would seem insufficiently eminent to fall into the first category, and yet she clearly sees herself as soaring high above writer’s entry-level. If that is indeed so, I’m surprised she can’t see what a nasty taste her piece leaves in the mouth.

All writers are forced to depend on the imaginative sympathy and engagement of their readers – but also on the charity and friendship of their colleagues. I read Tracey’s book before I read any reviews of it, and enjoyed it hugely. Nothing I saw in the Listener has changed that opinion at all.

I think I may be a little more competent to talk about poetry than Morris, who appears to be unable even to find a passage to justify her tag: “a little stale.” How hard can it be to locate a few flat lines in so many (26, by my count) often-lengthy poems? The fact that Morris does not succeed is no inconsiderable tribute to Tracey’s prowess as a poet.

And what’s wrong with putting out a book of mingled poems and stories? Hemingway did it. His first book was called Three Stories and Ten Poems (1923). Certainly it’s unusual, but whoever claimed that the best way to write was to stick to the beaten track? And what’s so “fussy” about the layout of the book? It has some pictures in it, true, and some blank pages. Is that a sin?

While I liked the story “Wheat,” it doesn’t actually strike me as the best story collected here. I prefer “Cuts,” with its brilliant first line:
When a customer got out his penis, as some of the customers had been known to do, the women of Diamante Salon kept up the chatter, their gossip ringing and glinting. …

Now that’s an arresting opening. (Even Morris is forced to admit that some of Tracey’s stories “have very promising first lines … and resonant final lines”). “Sleeping Over” is also particularly creepy and fine.

So the only advice I can give Paula Morris is to get over herself. Greeting anybody’s first book with such a concentrated avalanche of bile and patronising half-praise is a pretty mean-spirited thing to do. When one suspects that it’s motivated by crude envy rather than actual indignation it becomes even more pathetic. I don’t hope for the same thing to happen to her in the near future – I wouldn’t wish it on anyone. But I do think she should be ashamed of herself, and should take a long, hard look at her own reasons for publishing such a silly, malicious piece in a mass-market magazine.


(24-25/9/05)

brief 33 (2006): 35-37.
[Available at: Scott Hamilton, Reading the Maps (25/3/06)]

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Friday

Smithyman Goes Online (2006)








Scott Hamilton, ed.: brief 33 - exile and home (March 2006)


Smithyman Online: Collected Poems 1943-1995, by Kendrick Smithyman. Edited & with notes by Margaret Edgcumbe & Peter Simpson [http://www.smithymanonline.auckland.ac.nz/]



Margaret Edgcumbe & Peter Simpson, ed.: Smithyman Online (2006- )


once after a very long day I drove
to make camp at Mitimiti. The coast road burns out
in sunset, no one to see beach-wise
as the sea darkens, nobody seen for miles back
as wind darkened
.

– Smithyman, “Mitimiti and Gaia” (3.3.89). Folder XI: 1988-89

It’s still comparatively rare to review websites in literary journals, which seems a bit of a shame. I guess the audience for such high-culture authors as Smithyman remains basically print-oriented, and therefore likely to concentrate on his extreme posthumous productivity solely in terms of the books which have come out so far – Atua Wera (AUP, 1997); Last Poems (Holloway Press, 2002); Imperial Vistas Family Fictions (AUP, 2002); and – most recently – Campana to Montale (Writers Group, 2004).

And, without directions, this website might be a little difficult to find. A Google search brought up, first, the nzepc author page for Smithyman, then the Book Council entry, then my old pander essay on “Kendrick Smithyman’s Northland.” Even the Holloway Press’s own 1996 edition of Tomarata came up before the Collected Poems. And unless you happen to know to click on the words Mudflat WebWorks at the top of the Holloway Press page, you could still miss this fascinating edition.

It’s no big deal, though. The nzepc page provides a direct link to the Collected Poems, and that’s probably quite sufficient for most poetry-oriented readers.

So why a website rather than a series of separate volumes? Well, sheer bulk is one reason. The collection was divided, by Smithyman himself, into twelve chronologically-arranged folders (a thirteenth held the long poem Atua Wera; a further boxfile the materials for the Italian translations, Campana to Montale). Even the shortest of those folders, the last (1990-1995), is the size of a slim volume of verse. In fact, Peter Simpson’s Holloway Press has already issued it as a book, Last Poems. Cost is another factor. One doubts the traffic would bear another ten or so such deluxe volumes.

Of course there’s always the option of putting out Smithyman’s lifework as two or three close-packed scholarly volumes. I recently had occasion to consult Christopher Rick’s magisterial annotated Longmans edition of Tennyson (1st ed (1969) 1 volume, 2nd ed. (1987) 3 volumes – available now only in selected form as a paperback). The Ricks book is beautiful but somewhat cumbersome, and the fact that he wasn’t allowed to quote from the treasure house of manuscripts on deposit at Trinity College Cambridge in his first edition, a deficiency made up in the second edition, gives one more reason for preferring the practicality of the web.

An electronic edition can be continuously updated. Those who’d forked out for Ricks’s first version might have felt a bit reluctant to have to buy its greatly-enlarged successor, but what choice did they have? Nothing in the first edition could be seen any longer as authoritative. Smithyman Online may change over time (in fact there’s an invitation to send in notes and emendations included on the site) but no-one in their right mind would ever dream of printing the whole thing out. That’s not what it’s for.

There are a few surprises in the way Smithyman has been presented by Margaret Edgcumbe and Peter Simpson (thought one should also mention in this connection their indefatigable web designer, Brian Flaherty). It took me a while to notice that I could bring up an entire table of contents simply by clicking on the various folders, but once I had worked it out I was greatly impressed by the simplicity and elegance of the arrangement.

The thing that’s really exemplary about the site, though, is the Search function built into it. Not only can one find individual poems in this way, but keyword searches can be done to compile anthologies of poems dealing with particular Smithyman obsessions or themes. Just out of curiosity, I put in “Northland,” and got thirty references straightaway. In a collection of 1500 poems it’s hard to overemphasise how useful this is.

The notes are still a work in progress (as is the whole site, really – though fortunately only folders IX, X and XIII remain to be put up), but they’re already extremely useful. It’s great to find out what is known about the incidental detail of a typically allusive Kendrick poem before going off on one’s own individual tangent. This is where Margaret Edgcumbe’s close acquaintance with the day-to-day evolution of his work really pays dividends – not to mention Peter Simpson’s detailed bibliographical research.

Serious scholars of the poet (and there are already quite a few) would scarcely even think to question the longterm utility of an edition such as this. It costs nothing to access, is immensely convenient to use, and gives a good basis for the further archival work undoubtedly needing to be done on the “several hundreds” of poems not included in Smithyman’s own final cull.

The general reader, though, is the real longterm audience for this magnificent work. The Browse page of the site, where one can simply click on individual poems at random, is certainly a better way of idling away your time online than just playing another game of Freecell. Smithyman had something interesting to say virtually every day of his life, and – thanks to Margaret Edgcumbe and Peter Simpson – those complex, multi-faceted words are now accessible to poetry-lovers everywhere.
We must use, to stand open, to experience.
Do you need us, World, to query your answers?
Actually, do you need us


– “Mitimiti and Gaia”

Yes, we do. We need this site, and I hope we’ll soon be seeing more like it for our other poetic pioneers.


(24-25/9/05)

brief 33 (2006): 60-62.
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Thursday

Olwyn Stewart, Curriculum Vitæ (2006)








Scott Hamilton, ed.: brief 33 - exile and home (March 2006)


Olwyn Stewart. Curriculum Vitæ. Titus Novellas. Auckland: Titus Books, 2005. ISBN 0-9582586-2-7. RRP $19.95.



Olwyn Stewart: Curriculum Vitæ (2005)


Reviewing this book is one of the toughest assignments I’ve ever had. Not for the usual reason – trying to find as diplomatic a way as possible of expressing one’s reservations about some poor author’s book. My problem is precisely the opposite. I despair of conveying just how much I enjoyed reading Olwyn’s novella (three times now), and also of explaining just why I think it’s so extremely bloody good.

You see? You’re sceptical already. More pump-priming, you think – more writers scratching each other’s backs and forming mutual-admiration societies (actually rather harder to set up than one might think, in my experience: people do have this unfortunate habit of telling the truth sooner or later, even about their dearest friends, no matter how many obligations they’ve incurred in the meantime …)

To business, though. The opening scene. But it’s just so thoroughly amusing, so perfectly paced!
There’s a maroon plastic folder on a table outside a K Road café. A lady alcoholic, her lipstick awry, mutters ‘What’s this shit?’ shoves it out of the way and takes a swig from a bottle of sweet sherry in a brown paper bag. She flashes a grimace at a toddler in a pushchair, who pulls a face as if about to scream, then changes his mind and sucks on his own bottle.

We begin by focussing on the document itself, the absurd c.v. concocted by Mike’s girl-friend Brenda (“The result was a revelation. With the hangovers, the shambolic friends, the long stoned days, the metal fillings, the tinea and the threadbare underpants distilled out of the mixture, what remained was the essence of a proper person”); we then move to rapidfire scene-setting – K. Road, alcoholics, toddlers – combined with an opinion on the central motivating object at the heart of the story: “What’s this shit?” (What indeed? Ticket to a magic-carpet ride of mafia conspiracies, Berlin night-spots, and shallow graves, it would appear …). What it really makes us concentrate on, though, is characterisation. That lady alcoholic (who never reappears) is so perfectly delineated in two sentences that she seems to go spinning off in a halflife of her own, sprung fully-formed from her creator’s brow. The toddler, too. Why does he choose not to scream? Too dangerous, the author implies – too much chance of getting caught up in the crossfire. Better just to lower your head, take a swig and shut up … the moral of the story in a nutshell.

This camera’s eye perception of the scene gradually enlarges. An elderly woman takes temporary charge of the folder (“A decent lad,” she thinks, “trying to make a go of things, unlike her own good-for-nothing son, back underfoot at the age of thirty-seven. I blame the drugs, she sighs to herself …”). She is succeeded by a couple of slacker girls “precariously balanced on platform shoes” (“Oh fuck. I’ve burned a hole in his positive attitude.”)

Olwyn’s story, as should be already apparent, is a concentrated hymn to slackers and bogans everywhere. All those ex-hippies, all those old metallers, all those drug-addled potheads have found, at last, their laureate. She understands them, she can paint them with devastating wit and accuracy – but, above all, they amuse her. It’s as if an entire subculture of New Zealand has suddenly sat up and put out its tongue. One feels almost as Sargeson’s first readers must have felt when his Kiwi characters started Speaking For Themselves.

There was always something a little ponderous about all that carving a literature out of the nation’s rude soul schtick. though (as Sargeson himself acknowledged by veering off in ever stranger arabesques of invention – have you tried rereading “That Summer” lately?) Olwyn’s approach seems light and effortless by contrast, but no less serious in intention. The meeting with Jesus which occurs approximately halfway through the book is clearly pivotal to her conception of what the story is actually about. Her narrative exists, in fact, to motivate the possibility of such a scene – to create a world in which a character could accept matter-of-factly having the Messiah walk round the corner of the house, comment on the vegetables, then walk away again.

I hope I’ve succeeded in whetting your appetite, or at least rousing your curiosity just a little. Olwyn’s book is fated to be a sleeper, I fear. I doubt that anyone who ever reads it will fail to be amused by it. By the same token, I doubt that many of her readers will see just how extraordinary it is to achieve something so perfect.

Just as people failed to see the genius of P. G. Wodehouse, despite the worldwide popularity of his books, until Evelyn Waugh hailed him as “the head of my profession;” just (for that matter) as Waugh himself was seen as a comedian until the Second World War showed what he’d been talking about all along; so (I fear) Olwyn’s novella will share the fate of other denizens of that strange twilight kingdom between the short story and the novel (Big Steve King expressed it best, or at any rate most vividly, in his collection Different Seasons: “You look at your manuscript dismally, twist the cap off a beer, and in your head you seem to hear a heavily accented and rather greasy voice saying: ‘Buenos dias, señor! How was your flight on Revolución Airways? You like eet pretty-good fine I theenk, si? Welcome to Novella, señor! You going to like heet here pretty-good-fine, I theenk! Have a cheap cigar! Have some feelthy peectures! …’”)

I too have benefited from the wisdom and far-sightedness of Titus books in actually daring to publish some novellas in (rather spiffy, I think) individual bindings, so I can scarcely be trusted to report objectively on that. One thing we can all be grateful for, though, is the fact that Curriculum Vitæ has now been released onto an unsuspecting world, to exert its strange magic over readers everywhere.


(24-25/9/05)

brief 33 (2006): 106-8.
[Available at: Titus Books Website (29/4/06)]

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Wednesday

In the Shop of Wah Lee (2006)



Alistair Paterson, ed.: Poetry NZ 32 (March 2006)

In the Shop of Wah Lee:
Denys Trussell – Poet, Musician, Ecologist



Of cassia bark,
ceremonial swords,
pungent black beans,
basmati rice fragrance …

some
of the ten thousand things
named in the tao
of your people

you have made
a trading house
to distract and delight.
– Walking into the Millennium, 38-39.

Early in 2005, the poet Paula Green curated an exhibition for the Auckland City Council called “Poetry on the Pavement.” Of the twenty-odd poems she chose to have painted on the footpaths of the Auckland CBD, one was Denys Trussell’s “Poem in the Shop of Wah Lee.” Where? Outside Wah Lee’s on Hobson Street, of course.

My friend Mary Paul told me she was in the shop on one occasion when the subject of the poem came up. “Some people just don’t get it,” remarked the young man behind the counter. “A woman came in the other day complaining that it was just a list. I told her that meant she couldn’t see the difference between a husband and a lover …”

The difference between a husband and a lover. The poem is a list: “of mung dhal / and dried anchovy, / kumquat syrup / and granite pestles, // of greek olives, / the golden oil / and the dull / blue metal of woks …” It’s a list, but not an inventory – the intoxication and romance of a lover, not the dull quotidian of a husband.

Nothing wrong with husbands, mind you. Very useful in their way, but, yes, they do tend to lack poetry. Unless, of course, they moonlight as lovers – hopefully of their wives, but then you never know …

Trussell’s poem is not complex in form. Each of the first five stanzas begins with the word “of,” a syntactical pattern completed in the last stanza with the words “you have made / a trading house / to distract and delight.” If the variety of the “ten thousand things” is the tao of Chinese culture, then simplicity could be said to be the tao of Trussell’s poetry. He, too, wishes to “distract and delight” – distract us (at least to some extent) from the pedagogic designs he has on us; delight us with the musical naming of things.

In a lecture on metaphors, Jorge Luis Borges once calculated that if each of the “ten thousand things” which make up the material world was matched up with one of the remaining 9,999 in order to create a new metaphor, then one would end up with 99,990,000 of them. That’s a mind-numbing number. It’s also a completely pointless exercise. The “ten thousand things” is (of course) itself only a metaphor for the countless phenomena inside and outside us. The naming of things thus becomes an extraordinarily risky exercise in selection. What is (or is not) significant? What needs to be named?

Trussell’s longer poems, in particular, have a geologist’s insistence on classifying the levels that go to make up a self in this world:
we sleep,
and deep beneath
our body dreaming
the basalt rhythms,
the granite waves,
the tensile ribs
of limestone,
vast frames
of earth’s hull
rock in their seismic tides.
– Archipelago, 48.


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There is, it must be admitted, a case for the prosecution. There’s an austerity to Trussell’s poetry which can be distancing. He seldom laughs, tells a story or an anecdote, seems to lack patience with the jagged little details of everyday life. He is, in short, high maintenance: he demands that we sit up straight, wipe that smirk off our face, take things seriously for once in a while …

“Just the kind of book to give your sister,” said Dylan Thomas of Flann O’Brien’s At Swim Two Birds, “if she’s a loud, dirty, boozy sort of girl.” I doubt the same could be said of Denys Trussell’s latest, Speaking to the Islands of the Ancestors. This is poetry with a capital “P” – designed for the concert-hall rather than the booze-barn.

And yet, and yet … there’s a place for dignity and ceremony, times when the guffaws should die down. Trussell is good at those:
J’ai rêvé tellement fort de toi –

I have dreamed so much of you

J’ai tellement marché,

I have walked so much

tellement parlé

spoken so much

tellement aimé ton ombre

loved so much your shadow

qu’il ne me reste plus
rien de toi –


that there remains for me
nothing more of you –

Il me reste d’être l’ombre
entre les ombres.


There remains to me only the being
of a shadow among shadows.

L’ombre qui viendra et reviendra
dans ta vie ensoleillée


the shadow that will return again
and again in your sunlit life.
– Speaking to the Islands of the Ancestors, 19.

“The lines in French are a re-translation of a verse by the poet and resistance fighter Robert Desnos, who died at Terezine concentration camp in 1945. His words … are etched in red onto the wall of the island crypt.” The interesting thing here is the contrast in tone between the French and the English. Desnos’s verses are as simple and light as a feather, Trussell’s translation as heavy as lead, as monumental marble. “Il ne me reste plus / rien de toi” – none of you is left to me – becomes, in his rendering, “there remains for me / nothing more of you.”

Desnos thought he was just a guy writing a love poem to a girl. He had no way of knowing that he’d be turned into stone, transformed into a symbolic victim of oppression. I doubt he would have welcomed the discovery. His verses do, however, take on a strange, uncanny resonance when read in this way, written in red on the walls of the Mémorial des Déportations, on the Ile de la Cité in Paris. The literalism of Trussell’s translation somehow highlights this, allows us the experience of reading on various levels at the same time. It works. It’s a beautifully simple way of expressing the central point of his poem: what it means to a colonial outsider to go home, to re-encounter a live tradition from the outside.

It is indeed a multitudinous experience: finding out that one is an outsider to Western culture: the culture many of us, as émigré Europeans, grew up in; learning (in the process) vastly more about the potentialities of our own New World. Trussell’s book faces the challenge of expressing that dichotomy with dignity and restraint.


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Denys Trussell was born in Christchurch in 1946 (the year after Robert Desnos’ death in the little fortress at Terezín). His primary training was as a classical pianist, under the tutelage of his father, William Trussell (who himself studied in France, at the Paris Conservatoire). It’s perhaps fair to say that Trussell’s perspective is still principally that of a musician. He has been a pioneer in the interpretation of local composers such as Lilburn, and continues to give concerts and teach piano students. As well as being his main source of income, the piano is also important to his philosophy of composition. His longest poem, Archipelago, was written deliberately in symphonic movements, and he is a firm believer in the importance of melopoeia, word-music, in poetry.

Trussell began to write poetry around 1970, with the encouragement of Stephen Chan, then editor of the Auckland University student magazine Craccum. The first poem he wrote was, in fact, about music, and his first published book, Dance of the Origin (1980 – reissued in 2004 with illustrations by Nigel Brown) was the text for a dance performance.

His other books of poetry are, in order:

  • Words for the Rock Antipodes (Auckland: Hudson / Cresset, 1986) [short poems]
  • The Man of Paradise (Auckland: Hudson / Cresset, 1991) [short poems]
  • Archipelago: The Ocean Soliloquies (Auckland: Hudson / Cresset, 1991 – reissued 1999) [long poem]
  • Walking into the Millennium & Shorter Poems, 1991-1998 (Auckland: Brick Row, 1998) [shortlisted for the Montana Book Awards]
  • Islands of Intimacy: Love Poems 1970-2000 (Auckland: Addenda, 2000)
  • Speaking to the Isle of the Ancestors: Four Long Poems and Commentaries (Auckland: Brick Row, 2005)

He has also written two biographies, Fairburn (Auckland: AUP / OUP, 1984), and Alan Pearson, His Life and Art (Christchurch: Hazard Press, 1991).

It’s fair to say, I think, that the biography of A. R. D. Fairburn is a particularly crucial text in this discussion of Trussell’s own poetic work over the past three decades. It was a pioneering book, the first in a string of biographies and studies gradually illuminating the history of the formation of modern literary aesthetics in New Zealand. Books such as Rachel Barrowman’s Mason (2003), Gordon Ogilvie’s Denis Glover: His Life (1999), and – perhaps most importantly – Lawrence Jones’s Picking up the Traces: The Making of a New Zealand Literary Culture 1932-1945 (2003) have each given their particular slant on the period, but it’s worth remembering that Trussell was there first. (The Doctorate he earned for his work on the Fairburn biography was recently confirmed, after an interval of twenty-three years, by Auckland University. This coincides with a completely revised version of the book, soon to be reissued by AUP).

In retrospect, what is most striking about Trussell’s account of Fairburn is the way in which he is able to use it to formulate some of his own aesthetic dilemmas, half a century on. The passage on the “dual crisis” of the twentieth century artist, for example, could easily serve as an introduction to Archipelago, or his other works of the early nineties:
First, World War I had shown, as nothing of less violence could have, that the traditional values of bourgeois culture were derelict, and that the art forms which had grown up within the culture were no longer adequate to express its new condition. [62]

“Secondly … The New Zealander, a denizen of a landscape that could not be described by the poetic ‘tongue’ of English Romanticism, had to adapt even the stylistic innovations of the avant-garde if he or she were to express the unique qualities of life here.” This leads Trussell into a frontal assault on the poetic conventions of Modernism:
Poetry in the Western World had adapted to crisis by breaking into kaleidoscopic fragments. T. S. Eliot’s The Waste Land was the most symptomatic poem, embodying in its very structure the fragmentation of culture … The danger was that if an artist had to advance so far into this universe of disintegration that it became the formal principle of his art, could art survive? … Even W. B. Yeats, that most musical of poets, felt that the great song of major poetry was coming to an end. What use the poet beating his wings against the iron realities of the time? The coming man was the technologist. [62-63]

A good deal of Trussell’s book is devoted to chronicling Fairburn’s search for an approach and an idiom which did justice to the unique historical situation of the New Zealand artist – from (generally) and yet not strictly of the Western World, the Northern hemisphere; adapting (as much by the introduction of exotic flora and fauna as by the rapacious clearing and exploitation of the land) and yet gradually more and more adapted to an alien environment.

There’s a passage later in the book, ostensibly about Jocelyn, Fairburn’s wife’s failure to see London as her “spiritual home,” where we can again detect Trussell speaking in propria persona:
She felt her roots were in the Pacific, in its lightning-charged waters, its spiky volcanic landscapes, and in the light that could define rocks with the precision of a sculptor’s chisel. … Human life for her was still a coming thing; she felt herself a child of the oceanic world where civilisation had yet to achieve a modern form, and lay latent still on the rim of this vast continent of sea. [99-100]

And there we find an overt statement of the third element of Trussell’s aesthetic. We’ve discussed (albeit somewhat cursorily) the naming of things, the necessity for word music – now we come to ecology. Trussell has been a dedicated ecologist almost as long as he’s been a poet. He was a director of the New Zealand branch of Friends of the Earth for many years, and is still a shareholder in that organisation. He co-edited Edward Goldmsith’s The Way (Tao): An Ecological World View in 1992, and has written numerous pamphlets, articles and broadsides over the years in support of ecological causes. How does that relate to poetry? In an essay on his own work in the collection Towards a Transcultural Future: Literature and Society in a ‘Post’-Colonial World, ASNEL Papers 9.1 (Amsterdam & New York: Rodopi, 2004), he wrote as follows:
Ecology has a meaning that ties it into the arts. It is concerned with relationship of the parts of a living system, be it that of an organism or an entire biota. In considering relationship it considers a whole greater than the sum of its parts. Like the best in other sciences, its structure arises from an ecology of mind, a perception of infinite interrelationship in the physical world, reflected in the consciousness of the beholder. A similar ecology of mind exists in the arts. The oceanic organism of imagination connects the parts into a greater perceptual whole than their sum in an individual artwork and can make a new synthesis of all the symbolic and expressive resources of the cultural organism.
– “Poetry as Translation of History and Nature: The Poem Archipelago and the Ecopoetic Paradigm in the Pacific.” 135-56 [137].

Trussell’s plainly-stated desire, throughout all of his work, but particularly in the longer poems, is to achieve just such a synthesis, to compose a paradiso which might stand worthily beside Dante’s:
The hunger for paradise is saturated into Western consciousness: it is the lost, the yet-to-be-attained … Almost never, though, is it apprehended in all the richness and beauty that Dante attained at the end of The Divine Comedy. [145]

Just when one begins to fear that this plan is a little too ambitious, almost megalomaniac in its scope, Trussell retreats a little: “Its use [the word paradiso] in Archipelago is inevitably ironic.” Why? Because “as a dream driving history it must clash with nature.”

It’s no accident, then, that one of Trussell’s early books is called The Man of Paradise. Finding a way to live in nature and culture simultaneously, in the “intricate gardens, / the beautiful / conjunctions of lovers”:
and I walking
the blindest streets
of their love.
– Archipelago, 73.

is, for him, the whole point of the exercise. It’s an all-or-nothing project, a breathtaking act of legerdemain.


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A critic once famously accused post-war British writers of “biting off less than they can chew.” Denys Trussell’s work is certainly the antithesis of that. Whether he is really up to the task is less easy to say. When does ambition become hubris? Comparing oneself (if only implicitly) with Dante, Neruda, and Coleridge creates an awe-inspiring set of precedents …

Trussell’s quarrel with Kendrick Smithyman, a New Zealand poet of the previous generation, with an oeuvre built equally on the grand scale, is as good a way as any of interrogating the basis of his poetic.

In the notes to Walking into the Millennium, Trussell takes issue with Smithyman’s lines (from “An Ordinary Day Beyond Kaitaia”):
If we live, we stand in language.
You must change your words.
– Smithyman, Selected Poems, 92.

“Smithyman’s lines grant to human language a totality, in regards to ourselves, and a limitation, in regard to non-verbal and non-human languages against which I argue.” [101]

But is this really what Smithyman is saying?
I write in her dust
on the bonnet of our station wagon
M A T E. That will do, for a time.

These are the lines immediately preceding the assertion quoted above. “Her” dust, the dust of death, of “Hine-nui-te-Po, She who is darkness,” negates our proudest strivings. “You cannot put by.” There is no future for us beyond dissolution: no future, that is, except that of friendship, community. M A T E doubles as an injunction to stand by your mates, to mate (i.e. to reproduce) – even, perhaps, to mate (checkmate: the endgame in chess).

Living, for Smithyman, is a perpetual negotiation with language. Changing your idiom thus becomes shorthand for changing your life. Trussell ripostes that “the dialogue of mind and nature is of many dimensions, and not just carried out through words,” citing the example of “instrumental music … a language that has no semantic content whatsoever, yet is still an intelligible form of communication.”

The problem here lies in the definition of the word “language.” Smithyman, I assume, is using it to mean any intelligible semiotic system: a set of signs understood to convey meaning. Music is (at least arguably) such a system – like the four scratched letters M A T E on his station wagon’s bonnet which denote the word “mate.” Trussell, on the other hand, sees Smithyman as excluding all non-verbal communication from his paradigm. What is more, he accuses Smithyman of being in the grip of a twentieth-century movement in linguistic philosophy which rejects the very existence of a world outside language: “Rien de hors-texte,” as Derrida famously punned: “Nothing outside the text” or “There is no context”:
Whatever the substance of communication: musical, sculptural, verbal, mathematic, we are authors only of a secondary self. In our primary selves, which includes the self of our basic emotional structure, we are the outcome of nature and evolution. [101]

It’s a fascinating debate. I would argue that Trussell oversimplifies Smithyman’s statement by failing to read it in context. “That will do, for a time”, the elder poet characteristically observes at the end of his musings. More to the point, though, the lines Trussell himself writes in riposte to Smithyman’s:
Language is within you.

Language is outside you.
– Walking into the Millennium, 79.

are notably less resonant. Trussell’s besetting sin, in fact, is a failure to exploit the “negative capability” of poetry, defined by Keats as the Shakespearean of gift of remaining “capable of being in uncertainties, mysteries, doubts, without any irritable reaching after fact and reason.” Trussell might be said to adhere rather to the school of Coleridge, who “would let go by a fine isolated verisimilitude caught from the Penetralium of mystery, from being incapable of remaining content with half-knowledge.” The mere fact of providing such copious quantities of notes shows a fear on Trussell’s part that his audience will not understand him without help. He doesn’t expect us to be astute. Nor, apparently, does he trust his lines to speak for themselves.

To return to our starting point in that shop in Hobson Street, Trussell, I think, too often lets the husband predominate over the lover. At his best, in the delightful simplicity of poems such as “In the Shop of Wah Lee,” or the very moving “Letter for a Friend Dead in Auckland” from The Man of Paradise, he does us a very real service, reminding us of (at least) the possibility of fusing these three qualities: the variety of the “ten thousand things,” the music of the symphony, and – above all – the need to live in harmony rather than competition with the natural world:
Well, that’s
about it for now
Paul. I guess
that from the wreck
of its symphony
the sea will fling up
some new notes
of islands, or those
big sostenuto chords
of continents.
– The Man of Paradise, 62.

I look forward to many such notes from Trussell’s eco-muse to come.


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