Showing posts with label 2004. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2004. Show all posts

Wednesday

Takahe 2004 Poetry Competition (2004)





Takahe 53 (December 2004)

Takahe 2004 Poetry Competition Report



There were 377 entries in this year’s competition. From these, I selected 22 which stood out for various reasons. I winnowed this group down to a shortlist of eight, all (I felt) excellent of their kind. Then the really difficult decisions began.

I have finally decided to award the first prize to “The Pathologist’s Report” by Sue Heggie of Christchurch, and the second prize to “Ars aquatica” by Tim Upperton of Palmerston North. I took a long time deciding which order these two should go in. “Ars aquatica” is a beautifully written poem, a singing poem, in the form of a loose sonnet, which artfully contrasts the trout’s way of living in its own watery environment with (I presume) our own ways of living above water:
How it never takes the straight way.
How it makes wavering look like sureness
.

“The Pathologist’s Report”, on the other hand, deploys an almost clumsy force to achieve its end: forcing us to acknowledge the speaker’s grief, forcing us to comprehend it, almost re-live it:
Lying here on the slab, stitched from the navel to the chaps,
they’ve done your hair all wrong
.

It’s a shocking and horrifically gloomy subject: a young wife and mother having to identify her dead husband / lover’s body, but it’s carried off with a kind of deadpan grace. I was struck at first reading by how little it strives for effect: how true it all seems. Not effortlessly true, not at all with the fluid grace of “Ars aquatica” – one can see the author continually groping for new ways of coming at her feelings, at the intensity of her pain:
I’m going home now
betraying you by leaving. Now you know how it feels.
It’s cold here and you won’t speak to me.

It sounds more as if it’s been chiselled out of the writer’s flesh than written down on paper. This, to me, is the real thing. “Ars aquatica” (disappointing title, by the way – surely something more in keeping with the elegant swiftness of the poem could have been found?) is fluent and skilful: in its own way it rings equally true, but in the end I had to give my preference to the sheer originality, force and daring of “The Pathologist’s Report”. It takes guts to lay yourself as bare as that. I don’t think I (or any other reader) will forget it in a hurry.

It was almost equally tough to select two runners-up from the six remaining poems. These six were: “The third granddaughter” by Jan Hutchison, a charming (and disturbing) family meditation; “Belsen / Beslan” by Alice Hooton; “Moon” by Helen Bascand, a dislocated yet precise picture of “lunacy”; “The Rehearsal” by Michael Harlow, a complex interwoven prose meditation; “ur-text: a creative writing exercise” by Simon Perris, almost the only successful “exam-format” poem I’ve ever read; and “Mount Eden Prison” by David Fraundorfer. I’d really like to quote long sections from each of them, but I suppose I’d better get on and say that the two runners up I settled on were “Belsen / Beslan” and “Mount Eden Prison”. Luckily I don’t have to choose between them and can enjoy (if that’s the right word – appreciate might be better) both. I particularly liked the way in which sexual obsession was woven into the latter poem, without a hint of fake prurience.

As far as the rest of the entries goes, I felt there was a lack of joy in far too many of them. If this is the barometer of the nation’s soul just now, then I think we’re right to tremble: so much bile, so much angst, so much railing against old age! New Zealand remains (it appears) a landscape with too few lovers.

Of course I like darkness too – or, rather, I see it as only too appropriate too much of the time. I have, after all, chosen two prison poems and a dead body poem among my top four. What I don’t like is what I would describe as an unhelpful, almost forced harping on about how miserable things are. Maybe they are, but it’s defeatist and pointless to give in to such thoughts.

The four poems I have chosen are, I believe, all victory poems: they’re about facing the worst but trying your best. I think of those two little children in the dark wood, or the woman beside that slab in the morgue, or our strange tortured friend in Mt Eden, and I salute their courage. They help me to keep believing in the possibilities of human beings.


(15/11/04)

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Tuesday

brief 31: Editorial (2004)



Jack Ross, ed.: brief 31 - Kultur (November 2004)

Editorial:
brief goes political …



It is not just that the government's case is so ludicrously thin. After Iraq, it is difficult to take any government seriously that builds its case on secret intelligence. But Clark's government has gone way beyond this. It is attacking, in effect, some of the cornerstones of democratic civilisation. It appealed against the Court of Appeal's unanimous ruling that Zaoui's human rights should be taken into account during the review of his security status. In doing so, the government joins the ranks of the barbarians. …

So the Sunday Star-Times (Editorial – 17 October 2004). It seems we’re all on the same page at last. I watched that TV documentary (Enemy of the State: broadcast on Wednesday 13 October on TV1), and I must say that the noble faces of Ahmed Zaoui’s family and friends, pleading for his life while steadfastly refusing to blame New Zealand for its pusillanimity, made a strong impression on me. They were moving because they made no attempt to be. I’ve also read the recently published book on the case (I Almost Forgot About the Moon: The Disinformation Camapaign against Ahmed Zaoui, by Selwyn Manning, Yasmine Ryan and Katie Small (Multimedia Investments, September, 2004): RRP $NZ15). I can’t claim to have been any great mover in the cause otherwise. I read at Riemke Ensing’s Amnesty event, and have attended a few meetings: Riemke herself, Deborah Manning and a host of others take the prize there. However, I did go to visit Mr. Zaoui in prison last month in order to discuss his inclusion in this issue of brief, and he struck me as about a million miles removed from a terrorist.

How nice he is, or whether or not I consider him to be innocent (which in fact I do) isn’t the point, of course. The point is that if he cannot be proved to be guilty, and can be shown to be a legitimate refugee, then he should be set free. Isn’t that what Habeus Corpus and all those other little conventions that constitute the rule of law mean? I’m afraid that when I look at Ahmed Zaoui, I see myself – in some not-too-impossibly-distant future where believing in the things I believe in, publishing artefacts like the magazine you hold in your hands, associating with the kind of degenerates who write for a magazine like this, are all considered crimes. They probably are already. What’s more, I see myself in some jail cell unable to find out anything about the nature of the secret evidence that motivated my incarceration. (I was going to write “caused my conviction” – but then I remembered that people don’t have to be tried or convicted in order to be imprisoned nowadays). Wasn’t that what the storming of the Bastille was about? Imprisonment on secret evidence? Who dares prate on nowadays about the Nazis or the Gulag archipelago when we have Guantanamo Bay to wince at?

So, yes, I’m sorry – brief has gone political. I’m certainly not requiring you to agree with me on these matters, but I don’t think it’s healthy to ignore them even in so rarefied a publication as this. Literature should lead by example, sure – churning out propaganda is not quite what I had in mind. But one notable feature of the Zaoui case has been how powerful the Arts can be in moving people to act.

It’s fair enough to be concerned about Zaoui’s admitted convictions for terrorism, and his alleged links with Al Quaeda and the Algerian GIA. There are strong reasons for disputing both, but let’s say you think he should be kept inside for safety’s sake. Just what kind of imprisonment are we talking here? Fresh air, walks in the yard, cultivating your own flower garden? No, we’re talking ten and a half months of solitary confinement at Paremoremo. After that, transfer to the Auckland Remand centre. Martin Edmond has sent me some interesting notes about the outfit that runs that place:
The Labour Government recently announced it would not renew the licence of the only privately run prison now operating in this country, Auckland Central Remand Prison. Interestingly, there were some protests at this decision, because the prison in question has a reputation for sensitivity to cultural issues involving prisoners. This is perhaps surprising, because elsewhere in the world, subsidiaries of the GEO Group (Global Expertise in Outsourcing), as Wackenhut Corrections was recently renamed, have an appalling reputation.

George Wackenhut is a former FBI agent who made a career out of surveillance of political dissidents; by 1966 he maintained files on over four million people. Today, the GEO Group runs a global network (55 countries) of prisons, refugee detention camps, suburban shopping centres, banks, nuclear power plants, missile bases, 20 US embassies and, in the US, hires out its prisoners as unpaid labour for other companies.

(information from http://www.resistance.org.au/resources_corp_3.shtml)

Martin acknowledges that some of these details may be out-of-date, but they hardly sound like the sort of people we’d like to see tweaking the NZ prison system, do they? He continues:
Wackenhut’s antipodean arm, Australasian Correctional Management, which operates Auckland Central Remand Centre, used to run all six of Australia’s detention centres, as well as the six Australian prisons which it continues to operate; it was recently reported to have received a contract from the Australian Government to set up and operate three more refugee camps, though this hasn’t been confirmed. It also operates private prisons in South Africa, the United Kingdom and across the United States as well. All of these facilities make substantial profits.

ACM no doubt tried exceedingly hard to impress the NZ Government with the way in which it runs the ACRC, because it wants to operate more prisons here. It seems a good move to keep organisations like ACM out of this country, which already has a comparatively high rate of imprisonment: simply because incarceration, for whatever reason, of human beings for the purposes of making money is an obscenity. The fact that Helen Clark’s government, like John Howard’s, maintains a token presence in Iraq; that it continues to detain Algerian refugee Ahmed Zaoui; and will not, out of electoral timidity, take a clear stand on the racism of the resurgent National Party, is slightly offset by its decision to say goodbye to ACM.

NB The renaming of Wackenhut as GEO Corp. seems part of a ploy to disguise the extent of its activities. Go to http://www.wcc-corrections.com/index.html for their corporate profile.

That was originally going to be the subject of this editorial, by the way – the terrible dangers of resurgent racism, as embodied in that Don Brash speech at Orewa which caused National’s unprecedented surge in the polls. I even downloaded the speech to talk about it clause by clause. It all seems a bit overtaken by events now, though. Strange all this difference should be / ‘Twixt Tweedledum and Tweedledee … The brutish and cynical opportunism of Labour has rather taken my breath away. I used to be an admirer of Helen Clark. Hell-Clark I’m forced to call her now. To hear her going on about New Zealand’s human rights record to people overseas makes me want to puke.

So what’s to be done? Is Collin the Animal going to come to our rescue? Is Jimmy Stewart going to stand up in the Senate and turn our darkness into day? (Mr. Smith Goes to Washington, for those of you who missed that one). Well, maybe not, but perhaps we can learn something from that sort of tosh even so: Better to die on your feet than live on your knees! “Get up, stand up … Stand up for your rights!” Maybe we can’t change the world, but there’s absolutely no excuse for standing by while people are being imprisoned, indefinitely, without trial, in cruel and inhumane conditions, in our own back yard. It makes me sick.

There’s no profit in exaggeration, admittedly. It may be harder and harder to tell the difference between the goodies and the baddies, but there still is a (slight) difference between legitimate governments and terrorists. “What difference?” I hear you protest … The governments we see around us today are (if anything) more violent, intransigent, bloodthirsty, cynical, opportunistic and downright evil than their opponents. Not that those opponents are any great shakes either (witness the gunmen in that Russian school siege – people, to be sure, brutalised by a thousand acts of official oppression in their own towns and villages, but still brutal and intransigent thugs). The sole difference I can see is that we still have the right to stand up and denounce the things our governments do. Or even if we no longer exactly have the right (after that spate of insane homeland defence legislation sneaked through in most Western countries – including our own – after 9/11), at least we have the precedent of people like Gandhi, Martin Luther King, Nelson Mandela … hell, Malcolm X. Right now we need a few more people like that: people who will not sit down and shut up, people who will not take a statesmanlike view, people who are not realistic about politics, people who are not cynical, world-weary, compassion-fatigued, and all the other pathetic excuses we use for not doing what we know to be right.

Do as you would be done by – Love your neighbour as yourself – We must love one another or die … what else have we got in the long run? Trying to imprison, or kill, or simply ignore all those we’ve done wrong to is sowing the wind to reap the whirlwind. If I use enough clichés will you begin to understand what I’m on about? Who am I to preach, lazy and venal as I am? But I’m not afraid to call it the way I see it, even so.


(Friday, October 22nd, 2004)

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Monday

brief 30: Editorial (2004)


Jack Ross, ed.: brief 30 - Kunst (November 2004)

Editorial:
WARUM die KUNST?

Why do Nazis
get all the best lines?
ARBEIT MACHT FREI

Satan hath made thee mighty glib
When I hear the word
CULTURE

I reach for my revolver

I came here to chew gum
& kick ass

& I’m … plumb out of gum
We had to destroy the village
to save it


Shock and Awe



Gulf War II (2004)

“.. for the more experimental or highbrow
you’d turn to Landfall and Sport
or, farther out, Brief.”
– Harry Ricketts, “Poetry is on the menu.” NZ Listener (July 3, 2004) 60.


Warum die Kunst? Why Art?

I adore going to the movies on Queen Street. In the Force Entertainment Centre, with its huge blank Imax screen, we’ve made ourselves a little hell on earth – chrome-plated, labyrinthine, full of clumsy and inappropriate décor: space-rocket lifts, marbled-glass walkways, plastic vomit-coloured tentacles clinging to the walls …

Everything’s on sale there: fast food in the foodcourt, entertainment on the screens and games machines, books and mags and cds and dvds in Borders, clothes in Tommy-gun … I feel alienated by it and excited by it at the same time. Even now, after years of wandering around there, I can still get lost. I suppose that’s why I like it.

Or, rather, that’s why it seems so appropriate to me.

I’d just been to see that documentary The Corporation when I started to jot these lines down in my notebook. Corporations, it appears, are defined as legal beings under the fourteenth amendment to the US constitution. Not only are they alive, they have all the rights of humans and citizens. The fact that they’re (potentially) immortal doesn’t alter this one jot – in law, at any rate.

But what sort of human beings are they? Psychopaths, we’re told: without remorse, without a sense of guilt, ferociously acquisitive and aggressive … the film plugs its central metaphor remorselessly and persuasively.

Why Art, then? What’s the point, when the planet’s so urgently threatened by forces of destruction? Why not politics, activism, street theatre, propaganda, instead? Why not give up this vain pursuit of the aesthetic phenomenon (memorably defined by Jorge Luis Borges as “a revelation which does not occur”)?

I suppose one answer is the way I felt when I watched, in the film, the forces of solidarity at work in Bolivia, resisting the privatisation of the water supply. There they all were, men, women and children, united in a common cause, gathering in great numbers in the central square, cheering the leader’s words, suffering under the batons of the oppressor … It was moving, inspiring, effective even (ultimately, at any rate).

But what I was looking at was that man with the megaphone at the front of the crowd. Somehow there’s always someone with a megaphone leading the chant, and there’s an inner ring around them who are in the know – they’re the ones who planned the whole event, handed out the leaflets, got the show on the road. They’re too busy to talk to you, of course, but they’re tireless in the cause. We need them to be there – no doubt about that. The “spontaneous demonstration” is a bit of a mythical beast, I’m afraid.

But what if you don’t want to cheer and wave your arms up and down? What if you have reservations, scruples, delicate adjustments you’d like to make to the programme? The crowd-beast is no more responsive to such matters than the corporations it opposes. They’re worthy adversaries, in fact – mirror-images, one might say.

Why Art, then? Because Art is individual. Because it’s the voice of the awkward squad who won’t keep in step. Because it rakes up inconvenient facts that don’t fit the collective solution. Because it’s forced to see both sides of the question. Because it acts hastily and takes long views. Because it will listen to anyone – coward, hero, liberal, reactionary – any time. Because it’s got room for Céline as well as Camus, Pound as well as Henry James, Britney as well as Bob Dylan.

When it comes to getting people out of jail or changing laws, Art’s not generally much use (the examples most frequently cited: Uncle Tom’s Cabin, The Jungle, The Grapes of Wrath – are exceptions that prove the rule: different shades on the spectrum between propaganda and literature). Art is more about learning to be human than achieving partial ends.

So, all in all, I’m not ashamed of wasting my time on our arty little magazine. Whether what’s printed in it is any good, or has any effect on those who read it, is much more to the point. All I can say is that it’s encouraging to be told we’re “farther out” than all the others.

I’ve tried to find a place for the best of the myriad contributions which have come in over the past six months; I’ve tried to review (or at least notice) most of the books which have come down the mail-chute; I’ve tried to keep my eyes on the prize and my nose to the grindstone … but it is a long time since issue #29, you know (some of you have been kind enough to remind me of the fact). Profuse apologies for any omissions, then – it wasn’t a carefully meditated insult directed specifically at you, however probable that may seem in your darker moments.

Mexicans call the Pacific a warm place that has no memory (or so says Tim Robbins in The Shawshank Redemption). Sounds like bliss. Sounds like a myth. Those of you who think we still need memories, read on …


(31/10-1/11/04)

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Sunday

Murray Edmond: Fool Moon (2004)


Jack Ross, ed.: brief 30 - Kunst (November 2004)


Murray Edmond, Fool Moon. Photographs by Joanna Forsberg. Auckland: Auckland University Press, 2004. ISBN 1-86940-316-9. 72 pp. RRP $27.99.



Murray Edmond: Fool Moon (2004)


It’s inspiring to read a book of poems as intensely thought-through and considered as this one. My first, superficial overview fastened mainly on Joanna Forsberg’s pictures, beautifully acute and strange – it’s still hard for me to believe the first was taken at Paekakariki: it looks so unequivocally a scene of Eastern European industrial decay. As I read the poems more carefully, though, I began to see the kinship between text and pictures: the curiously simple yet somehow linguistically alienated diction of the verse matching perfectly these fresh views of a horribly and insistently quotidian local reality:
it is not hard to leave when there is nothing left
carrying the lost picture which you do not want
the person who was is not and so everything else has escaped [8]

“Elegy for Mama” doesn’t really sound like a New Zealand poem – nor does it sound imitative of an Eastern European one. In form it recalls Eliot’s Ash Wednesday, but it doesn’t really sound like that either. It sounds like Murray Edmond, in fact. As if he’d founded his own linguistic state between – irreconcilable? – homelands. Another interesting case is the “Ballad of the Penguin,” built up (according to the notes), out of lines chosen arbitrarily from a NZ Verse anthology. It seemed a very effective poem as I was reading through. Only after I’d discovered its provenance did any disjointedness appear in the cold spare lines. This book seems like a breakthrough to me. The intelligence so liberally on display in earlier work has finally succeeded in constructing its own world, or perhaps it’s just that I’ve finally managed to see it.


(4/11/04)

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Saturday

Basim Furat: Here and There (2004)


Jack Ross, ed.: brief 30 - Kunst (November 2004)


Basim Furat, Here and There: A Selection. Wellington: HeadworX, 2004. ISBN 0-476-00885-9. 64 pp. RRP $19.95.



Basim Furat: Here and There (2004)


I suppose a central difficulty in presenting any Arabic author in English is the former language’s tolerance for rhetoric. English writing, for better or worse, has (over the past century, at any rate) become addicted to the spare, the pared-down, fragmentary. Basim Furat’s poems are therefore particularly hard to judge when taken out of literary and cultural context. There are a good many peacocks and dates and camels and minarets in them. He’s particularly fond of making things “neigh” or “whinny” or “coo” (an earlier volume is in fact entitled The Vehemence of Cooing) – which gives an unfortunate effect of Old MacDonald’s farm to much of the work. Having said that, though, there are moments when one feels the mask is stripped away, when he allows himself to speak simply and expressively of an almost unimaginable range of experience: as a soldier in the second Gulf War, an Iraqi exile in the bland confines of Wellington, lover, brother, child – “An embrace interrupted only by strafing,” as he calls it on p.22. One of the strongest of these poems, I would suggest, is “1 March 1967” reprinted in dual-text (backwards, as befits its orthographic tradition) on pp.110-13 of brief #31. It is, incidentally, very enterprising of HeadworX to commit itself to publishing translations both from the Hebrew and the Arabic poetry during this dark year of political divisions and hatreds. Basim Furat’s book would therefore have a symbolic significance to us even if his verse were entirely pedestrian. Fortunately that is by no means the case.


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Friday

Harvey McQueen: Recessional (2004)


Jack Ross, ed.: brief 30 - Kunst (November 2004)


Harvey McQueen, Recessional. Wellington: HeadworX, 2004. ISBN 0-476-00271-0. 80 pp. RRP $19.95.



Harvey McQueen: Recessional (2004)


“Poems of a miserable old git,” is one description I’ve heard of Harvey McQueen’s Recessional (“Lo, all our pomp of yesterday / Is one with Nineveh and Tyre,” as Kipling put it in his own poem of that title). That sounds a bit negative, doesn’t it? Strangely enough, I think it translates into quite a compliment. Miserable Old Gits, or Middle-Aged Daddies (MOGs or MADs) need a spokesman too, and McQueen makes an unusually eloquent one. I found myself marking poem after poem as I read through: the shocking power of “A Partial Answer to an Old Question:”
childhood’s question “What
would it be like to be a girl?” answered
as far as it ever can be for me; also for
those strangled because they are women.

– an answer given (appropriately) by TV serials. It’s difficult to quote, as the poems are such organic wholes: the “Two slaughters that / helped assemble my existence” in “Bayeux” must be deduced to be D-Day and the Battle of Hastings – McQueen won’t tell us directly. If we don’t know already we’re not worth talking to.


(4/11/04)

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Thursday

Guyon Neutze: Dark out of Darkness (2004)


Jack Ross, ed.: brief 30 - Kunst (November 2004)


Guyon Neutze, Dark out of Darkness. Images by Jürgen Waibel. Wellington: Steele Roberts, 1999. ISBN 1-877228-10-9. 144 pp. RRP $24.95.



Guyon Neutze: Dark out of Darkness (1999)


Guyon Neutze’s curious set of poems, which began life as “part of a much larger performance, now nearly finished” (which, one presumes, is the “epic-length poem on mid-century Europe” referred to in the blurb), appeared five years ago to – one gathers – a chorus of complete indifference. Isn’t that so often the way in New Zealand? “Ignore it and maybe it’ll go away” is the standard strategy for dealing with anything at all out of the ordinary here. I saw a copy in Unity Books when I was last in Wellington, and couldn’t resist buying it. It was more Jürgen Waibel’s rough, black, disturbing drawings (and Roger Steele’s generous, sprawly book design) than the poems themselves that sealed the deal, I must confess, but I can’t say I regret it. Neutze can be accused of ambition without performance – too often the poems dissolve into airy generalisations about human behaviour, rather than particular examples of particular acts. He also depends too much on ostentatious colloquialism to mask essentially abstract states of mind: “with the last scruple scrubbed / like a smudge from a cotton smock, I’ll knuckle down / and clean this place of its riff-raff and low scum” [50] – the “furnace of pure mind” appears to be where he is happiest. However, his subject matter, the inherent tendency to violence and intolerance in human beings, is anything but trivial, and there’s a terrible conviction in the sheer scale of his work. One feels inundated at times, and yet also curiously excited and inspired. I feel he has something to learn from another local epic-writer, Niel Wright (reviewed below) about the importance of character and narrative in long poems, though he can already be seen to exceed him in texture and technique.


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Wednesday

Mark Pirie: Bullet Poems &c. (2004)


Jack Ross, ed.: brief 30 - Kunst (November 2004)


Mark Pirie, Bullet Poems: In Four Rounds. Paekakariki: Earl of Seacliff Art Workshop, 2004. ISBN 1-86942-030-6. 42 pp. / Mark Pirie, ed. “Recent New Zealand Poetry: 50 Poems by 50 Poets.” In Papertiger: new world poetry #04, edited by Paul Hardacre & B. R. Dionysius. ISSN 1445-1980. CD-ROM for PC. / Mark Pirie, ed. Tupelo Hotel: Winter Readings at Tupelo. ISBN 1-86942-046-2. 40 pp. Paekakariki: ESAW, 2004.



The Mark Pirie juggernaut rolls on. Anthologies appear to flow from his pen with even more facility than slim volumes of verse. Hot on the heels of his recent selected poems Gallery (Cambridge, UK & Applecross, Aust: Salt, 2003), he’s compiled a gallery of New Zealand poets for Paul Hardacre’s CD-Rom Papertiger (literally, in fact – the poets’ faces are arranged in a tight grid, and the poems can only be accessed by clicking on the pictures). Then there’s an anthology of poems by the readers at the Tupelo Hotel (complete with Doors imagery to match the parody of the famous Beatles Abbey Road picture on the cover of his recent JAAM retrospective). Nor can one accuse Pirie of lacking the courage of his convictions: having seen him perform his “Ballad of Courtney Love” in full drag, I can testify to the terrifying strength of his determination to link staid old NZ poetry with the more flourishing pastures of rock music. What, then, are the Bullet Poems like? I can’t help but feel the “gangster poet” mask sits, at times, uncomfortably on the bookish youth reading Mandelstam. The latter, to me, rings truer. Perhaps I’m wrong. In any case, there’s a strange, febrile excitement about it all which appeals to me very much.


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Tuesday

Niel Wright: Only a Bullet will stop me now (2004)


Jack Ross, ed.: brief 30 - Kunst (November 2004)


Niel Wright, Only a Bullet will stop me now. Paekakariki: ESAW, 2004. ISBN 1-86942-044-6. 35 pp. RRP $15.00.



This book is certainly an interesting museum piece. First published in 1970 as part of its author’s epic The Alexandrians (now available, we’re told, in a multi-volumed “definitive edition”), it’s hard, at first sight, to work out what exactly it’s all about. “They have carpet / In the carport.” runs the poem “Life with the Joneses” [32] which seems to sit rather uneasily with the stilted “Hero’s Welcome,” an account of Theseus’s unfortunate first meeting with his father, the King of Athens. Most of the book, however, is taken up by a verse novella “The Sun Wheel,” the story of a fatal love triangle in mid-century Canterbury (“a psychological study of a topdressing tragedy,” according to the blurb). The rather clumsy, Masefield-esque versification cannot obscure the author’s real gift for narrative, and no doubt one could draw parallels between these two central stories if one wished. The blurb goes so far as to describe Wright’s Theseus as a “sort of Hamlet in reverse,” which seems to me special pleading, especially coupled with the claim that “Niel Wright in the 1960’s redefined English poetry not just in New Zealand but everywhere” … Comments like this risk leaving the author looking ridiculous, which is a shame given the immense labour and thought he’s clearly poured into his oeuvre as a whole. The stultifying conformity of Kiwi culture appears to be his principal theme (in this instalment of his work, at any rate), and one can’t help agreeing with him there!


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Monday

William Direen: Jules (2004)


Jack Ross, ed.: brief 30 - Kunst (November 2004)


William Direen, Jules. Wellington: Alpha Books, 2003. ISBN 0-9583266-4-9. 241 pp. RRP $34.95.



William Direen: Jules (2003)


Iain Sharp recently, in a Landfall article, singled out the blurb of Jules as a particularly egregious example of local authors who shoot themselves in the foot by suggesting the unreadability of their product: “He begins the journey, through the tunnel of gravid shade, homewards, by means tortuous, peristaltic, swallowing images before and expelling them behind, each image possessing its own intoxicating fluidity, …” etc. etc.

It is, one is forced to admit, a bit daunting. Best to ignore it for the moment, I would suggest. Who is William Direen, anyway, and why has he insisted on giving us such an oddly set-out text? “Bill Direen is Chris Knox for people who think of Chris Knox as Neil Finn,” is Scott Hamilton’s rather gnomic summary of Bill Direen’s status within New Zealand music. A maverick, in other words – a man whom it’s unsafe to type, an outsider, a loner, but also a very influential artist within the alternative tradition.

And now he’s turned to writing novels (this, it would appear, is the third – after Wormwood (1997) and Nusquama (2002)). It’s the tale of a man named Jules Wells, a professor of Art history in Paris, and his peregrinations through that city on a single day (it’d be safe to say that the shade of Ulysses is never too far from Direen’s thoughts). Since Jules is an Art Historian (and also something of an artist), his perceptions require footnotes – almost ludicrously detailed accounts of particular paintings or painters recalled by the images he “swallows before and expels behind” (to paraphrase the blurb quoted above).

The effect of these constant interruptions to the flow of his perceptions is, above all, to make one stop and think. The footnotes could, after all, have been arranged more conveniently on each page, rather than as a block at the end of the book. Direen clearly wishes us to worry about how we’re to read his text. Are we going to interrupt it by leafing backwards once or twice a page, or are we going to read it through and then consult the notes en bloc? The first seems better to me – there’s a good deal in the notes which only makes sense in the context of the surrounding matter. But there’s also the danger of losing one’s way within the, at times quite baffling, narrative:
Such a chance we have been given to feel, to understand. Yet we inflict imitation on our children, as if replication were possible. We praise our professors, doctors, captains – for what? For their sleight of hand? Where is he whose weapon can gainsay the wound? [185]

Direen’s central interest is in perception – how do we see reality. The purpose of his book (insofar as one can commit oneself to so sweeping a formulation) is to suggest new ways of describing and apprehending the eddy of impressions all around us. The (crucial) passage I began to quote above continues: “We are of those neither hot nor cold, forever-going-between, or, worse, we are inert, those who know no narrative, clinging to possessions, who purchase, plan-patent, code-deciphered.”

It certainly isn’t that he doesn’t believe in narrative. His scorn for the “inert … who purchase, plan-patent, code-deciphered” is quite apparent. This is no Finnegans Wake. Direen’s book has characters (or, at least, one main character), action, a plot … Rather, I think he believes in narratives. A rock musician and an Art historian may construct their world in different ways, but they do construct it. Direen is the enemy of apathy, the lukewarm, the ready-made. For that reason alone, even if there were no others, his book would deserve respect.


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Sunday

The Poetics of Stasis in The 1001 Nights (2004)



Raewyn Alexander, ed.: Magazine 2 [aroha, love, l’amour] (November 2004)

The Poetics of Stasis in The 1001 Nights




A few words of introduction: the Book of the Thousand and One Nights (Kitab Alf Layla wa-Layla) is a collection of stories told by a Queen to her husband. It was first introduced to Europe by the French scholar/translator Antoine Galland in 1704. References to the Arabic original go back as far as the 9th century A.D., though most of the tales are undoubtedly later than that. The frame-story of Queen Scheherazade and King Shahryar is probably Persian in its present form – but it has analogues in India (not to mention the Biblical Book of Esther).

The story runs basically as follows (it is never exactly the same in any two versions). Two brothers, Shahryar and Shah Zaman, reign over two neighbouring kingdoms. The younger brother, Shah Zaman, on the eve of his departure to visit Shahryar, kills his wife, whom he finds committing adultery with a cook. He only recovers his spirits when he sees his brother’s wife conducting an orgy with a group of male slaves and ladies-in-waiting. The brothers go out hunting for an answer to their dilemma, and encounter a woman who has been kept in a sealed box by a genie since he abducted her on her wedding night. She threatens to wake the sleeping genie unless they sleep with her, and then takes their seal-rings to add to her collection of 570 other trophies. Convinced by this that women are fundamentally faithless, Shahryar has his wife executed, and makes a pact with his brother that they will marry a virgin every night and have her executed in the morning. Shah Zaman returns to his own kingdom, and the slaughter begins.

After about three years stocks are running low, and the elder daughter of Shahryar’s Vizier asks her father to select her as the King’s new bride. He refuses, but she is insistent. The girl, Shahrazad, arranges that her sister Dunyazad should accompany her, and ask her to tell a story in the cool of the morning, and so the first of the thousand and one nights begins. That story is deliberately left unfinished, and the King’s curiosity makes him postpone her execution to a second morning, and then to a third, and so on and so on.




Every era seems to have its own questions to ask about this collection. In the nineteenth century, the psychology of the main participants, and the inherent implausibility of some of the stories led many writers to fabricate a “1,002nd Night.” In the late twentieth century, our questions took a stranger turn.

The arithmetic of the matter, for instance: Why 1001 nights? One of the characters in John Barth’s novel The Tidewater Tales (1987) admits that “she’d thought the number meant simply plenty and then some ... a taleteller’s number” (533). There is, however, a possible gynaecological aspect to the question. At the end of the Nights (in Burton’s version, at any rate) Scheherazade presents her husband with three sons “one walking, one crawling and one sucking” (Burton, 1885, 10: 54) – as Barth remarks, this means that “her pregnancies must have been spaced about equally through the 1001 nights. 3 ›‹ 266 = 798 from 1001 leaves 203 nights before and between” (Barth, 1987, 454). So far so good, but in “The Story of Scheherazade’s First Second Menstruation” which begins a few pages later, the numbers are “crunched” (his word) very thoroughly indeed:
it would not have been very wise of young Scheherazade to do Night One with Shahryar at a time when she happened to be menstruating ... Seems to me that along with the body count you’d’ve been keeping tabs on the moon and your menstrual calendar before you made your big move, and that once you’d cleared the first hurdle by surviving Night One, you’d want as much time as possible to firm up your position before the night comes when you have to make it on art without sex. (Barth, 1987, 534)

So, if a boy child “walks” at twelve to fifteen months, “crawls” from 6 months to a year, and “suckles” before that, it seems “pretty clear” to Barth’s boy genius Chip Sherritt that Scheherazade “must have ovulated and menstruated once after each of her three babies was born, and that she then got pregnant again at the very next ovulation after each of those menstruations – at least after the first and second of them. Otherwise the kids come out to be the wrong ages at the end.” So:
Assuming for the sake of simplicity and ... symmetry, that she first got pregnant on Night One ... She delivers Number One on Night Two Six Seven. That makes him two years and four days old on Night Ten Oh One; he’s been walking for maybe a year ... on Night Three Thirty, she gets pregnant for the second time, and she delivers Son Number Two exactly two hundred sixty-six days later, on Night Five Ninety-Six. That’ll make him thirteen months, ten days old on Night Ten Oh One: not too late to be crawling still ... Seven weeks later she menstruates again, on Night Six Forty-five – you could call that her second first menstruation – and two weeks after that she gets pregnant for the third time. On Night Nine Twenty-five she delivers her third son, so he’s just two and a half months old at the end of the story: nursing, but not crawling yet. Seven weeks later she menstruates again, just as she did after her first three pregnancies ... But the thing to notice is that if she ovulated right on schedule on Night Nine Eighty-eight there and didn’t get pregnant ... then she’s going to menstruate again on Night Ten Oh Two. As a matter of fact, since she always tells her stories just before daybreak, Night Ten Oh One is really Morning Ten Oh Two, and it could be she ... calls in the children and pleads for her life because she realises that for the first time in a thousand and one nights she’s having a normal twenty-eight-day menstrual period. The king hasn’t made her pregnant again on schedule: it’s her first second menstruation. (Barth, 1987, 539)

“How is this night different from all other nights?” (536), then – not because of a case of “Storyteller’s Block” – but because the King “isn’t going to get it again for nearly a week.” (540) Of course, all of this calculation has a rather frivolous air: the main reason for stopping, as another of Barth’s characters adds, “went without saying: that at the end of Night Ten Oh One, Shahryar had been a good boy for exactly as long as he’d been a bad one. It was the right time to make her move, even without the private extra reason.” (540).




All of which leads us to another, more serious level of calculation. If, in the period before his meeting with Scheherazade, Shahryar killed 1001 virgins, then his brother Shah Zaman, who did not have the benefit of her ministrations, must have killed 2002. This forms the subject of Barth’s novella “Dunyaziad” (1972), where Scheherazade’s younger sister, who has been married off to Shahryar’s younger brother at the end of the Nights, gives her own version of the whole story to her new husband, whom she has tied to the bed in preparation for a revenge castration and killing.

Luckily, the brother is able to plead in extenuation that he in fact executed no-one, because his very first virgin told him of a local tradition that there was a land far to the west “peopled entirely with women, adjoining another wholly male: for two months every spring they mated freely with each other on neutral ground, the women returning home as they found themselves pregnant, giving their male children to the neighbouring tribe and raising the girls as members of their own.” (Barth, 1972, 49-50). She advised him, even if this legend were untrue, to make it true with his own exiled brides, and thus avoid a parting of the ways with his elder brother. Dunyazad, reluctantly, agrees to forgive Shah Zaman and try the experiment of trusting him, just as her elder sister, similarly armed with a razor, is persuaded simultaneously to let Shahryar, her own husband, live.

This is not the only complicating factor about the end of the Nights, however. In his book L’Œil et l’aiguille [The Eye and the Needle] (1992), the critic Abdelfattah Kilito sets out to examine the implications of the image, so frequent in the text, “d’écrire, au coin de votre œil, avec un aiguille très fine, toute une histoire chargée d’une leçon morale” [writing, in the corner of your eye, with a fine needle, a whole story charged with a moral lesson] (Kilito, 7). Where do the stories that Scheherazade tells come from? We are told that she “had collected a thousand books of histories relating to antique races and departed rulers” (Burton, 1885, 1: 15), but does she bring them with her to the palace? Whether the books move physically or not, they are contained within her, and she retells their narratives. At the end of the nights, the King commands that the stories that Scheherazade has told him are to be written down in “un livre en trente volumes qu’ils intitulèrent Le Livre des mille et une nuits. Le roi le déposa dans sa bibliothèque.” [One book in thirty volumes which they entitled The Book of the Thousand and One Nights. The King deposited it in his library](Kilito, 20). The stories are thus protected in three ways – first by being written down at all, second by being recorded in letters of imperishable gold, third by being preserved in the King’s library. In some versions the King himself sends out copies to edify the population, but in most this dispersal is left to a later monarch who reads the one unique copy preserved in the royal archives.

Who do the stories come from, then? Logically, there are only three witnesses to the whole train of events – the King, Scheherazade herself, and her sister Dunyazade. “La fonction royale de Shâhriyâr ne s’accorde avec la vocation de conteur; dans les Nuits, les rois sont toujours en position d’auditeurs, jamais de narrateurs ... Quant à Dunyâzâde, il n’est pas dit que sa mémoire lui permettrait de prendre les relais de sa soeur. Elle apparaît avant tout comme une complice” [The royal rôle of Shahryar is not consonant with the vocation of story-teller; in the Nights, kings are always in the position of listeners, never of narrators ... As for Dunyazade, it is nowhere said that her memory would allow her to follow in her sister’s footsteps. She seems more like an accomplice] (Kilito, 24). We are left, then, with Scheherazade – who must either retell all 1001 nights of stories to the scribes – “En fait, il lui faudra plus de mille et une nuits, car désormais elle ne va pas raconter mais dicter ses contes, et la dictée prend évidemment beaucoup plus de temps que la narration” [In fact, it will take her more than a thousand and one nights, because from now on she will not be telling but dictating her stories, and dictation obviously takes far more time than narration] (Kilito, 25):
Mais peut-être ne s’est-elle pas donné tant de peine, peut-être a-t-elle tout bonnement remis aux scribes ses livres, ceux du moins qui ont servi de base à ses histoires. Le mille et unième livre ne serait alors qu’un extrait, un fragment, une citation des mille livres qui constituaient la bibliothèque de la reine de la nuit. (Kilito, 26)

[But perhaps she didn’t go to all that trouble, perhaps she simply lent the scribes her books, at any rate those which were the basis of the stories. The thousand and first book would accordingly be no more than an extract, a fragment, a citation of the thousand books which constitute the library of the Queen of the night.]

However idle this speculation may seem, the point I wish to make is that it is the same kind of conjecture as John Barth feels driven to make about the Nights. In fact, in the “Dunyaziade,” he settles the argument over the source of Scheherazade’s stories by sending a thinly disguised version of himself back in time as a genie, who prompts her with stories from his own copy of Burton’s 10-volume English translation of the collection!




When the argument is not concerned with arithmetic, it centres on labyrinths. Kilito (15) refers in his book to Jorge Luis Borges’ claim that on the 602nd Night:

el rey oye de boca de la reina su propia historia. Oye el principio de la historia, que abarca a todas las demás, y también – de monstruoso modo –, a sí mismo. ?Intuye claramente el lector la vasta posibilidad de esa interpolación, el curioso peligro? Que la reina persista y el inmóvil rey oirá para siempre la trunca historia de Las Mil y Una Noches, ahora infinita y circular ... (Borges, 1989-90, 2: 47)

[The King hears his own story from the Queen’s mouth. He hears the beginning of the story, which embraces all the others as well as – monstrously – itself. Does the reader really understand the vast possibilities of that interpolation, the curious danger – that the Queen may persist and the Sultan, immobile, will hear forever the truncated story of A Thousand and One Nights, now infinite and circular?]


Kilito claims that this idea is to be understood only symbolically, and that only the naïve reader will go from version to version of the Nights trying to verify the fact. Certainly it is the case that on page 199 of Burton’s sixth volume Scheherazade begins to tell the story of the “King’s Son and the Ifrit’s Mistress,” which does loosely resume the story of Shahryar’s encounter with the woman kept in a chest by the Genie from the frame-story. Elsewhere, in “El jardín de los senderos que se bifurcan” [The Garden of Forking Paths], Borges attributes the phenomenon to a copyist’s error, but in a context that makes it clear that what essentially concerns him is his own story’s theme: how a single book can become infinite:

Antes de exhumar esta carta, yo me había preguntado de qué manera un libro puede ser infinito ... Recordé también esa noche que está en el centro de las 1001 Noches, cuando la reina Shahrazad (por una mágica distracción del copista) se pone a referir textualmente la historia de las 1001 Noches, con riesgo de llegar otra vez a la noche en que la refiere, y así hasta lo infinito. (Borges, 1985, 2: 169-70)

[Before uncovering this letter, I’d been asking myself how a book could be infinite ... I remembered, too, that night in the middle of The Thousand and One Nights when Queen Shahrazad, through a magical slip of the copyist, started to retell the story of The Thousand and One Nights, with the risk of again arriving at the night on which she would begin it, and so on to infinity.]


We’ve already seen some of the problems associated with Scheherazade’s retelling all her stories for the King’s library – also the temptation to a 1,002nd Night. Borges finds those ideas comparatively uninteresting. In his late poem “Metaphors of the Thousand and One Nights,” he tries to sum up the collection’s appeal in terms of recurrent images – the River, the Web of a tapestry, the Dream, and the Map. His images, for the most part, emphasise change and flow – but a flow confined to a static, circular course – and this seems to be one of the things that these obsessively self-questioning twentieth-century readings of the Nights have in common.



At the end of his reading of the story “The Porter and the Three Ladies of Baghdad,” the critic Andras Hamori emphasises the idea of arbitrary, almost self-satirising patterns of repetition – the threes and sevens which abound in the story (and which Borges also refers to in his poem) – and points out that they have a certain quotient of terror when imposed ethically. The marriages imposed at the end of the tale by the “Commander of the Faithful” Harun al-Rashid solve no real problems, but indicate his tendency to exert power over things he does not even understand: something also signalled in his discovery, again at the very end of the story, that as titular head of Islam and thus the heir of Mohammed and Solomon, he has power even over such supernatural beings as Jinnis and Jinniyahs.
Are the Nights, too, then, trapped in a kind of stasis – which, my Etymological Dictionary informs me, originated as a pathological terms referring to a general stoppage of circulation in the veins and arteries of the body (for which read the body politic, bodies of laws and conventions, and so on)? Well, yes, on the surface this is the state of things in Shahryar’s kingdom. It is a spiritual wasteland, plagued by a dragon – or an idealist disillusioned by the world as it is. In the Grail legend, the Waste Land is cured by a question which the wise do not think to ask; Shahryar, similarly, is cured by a reenactment of the materials and minutiae of life – a total reeducation in the structure of his world. Scheherazade thus becomes, in a very literal sense, the mother of the nation – her skill at subcreation cures an imbalance in Creation.
So why are authors and critics so fascinated with this construct? Is it not, finally, with the idea of retelling our dilemma until it forms a curative pattern. It seems, then, that W. H. Auden’s tribute to Sigmund Freud:

He wasn’t clever at all: he merely told
The unhappy Present to recite the Past
Like a poetry lesson till sooner
Or later it faltered at the line where

Long ago the accusations had begun (Auden, 92)


ought to be matched against the title of an essay written at the height of the furore over the anti-novel and the nouveau roman: “Scheherazade Runs out of Plots, Goes on Talking; the King, Puzzled, Listens: An Essay on New Fiction” (1973). Borges ends his poem, then, with a message meant specifically for us:

Sigue leyendo mientras muere el día
Y Shahrazad te contará tu historia
.
(1989-90, 3: 170)

Keep reading as the day declines and
Scheherazade will tell you your own story.

Works cited
  • Auden, W. H. (1979). Selected Poems. Ed. Edward Mendelson. London: Faber.
  • Barth, John. (1982). Chimera. 1972. London: Granada.
  • Barth, John. (1988). The Tidewater Tales: A Novel. 1987. London: Methuen.
  • Borges, J. L. (1989-90). Obras completas (1 – 1923-1949; 2 – 1952-1972; 3 – 1975-1985). 3 vols. Buenos Aires: Emecé Editores.
  • Borges, J. L. (1985). Prosa completa (1930-1975). 4 vols. Barcelona: Editorial Bruguera.
  • Burton, Richard F., trans. (1885). The Book of the Thousand Nights and a Night: A Plain and Literal Translation of the Arabian Nights Entertainments. 10 vols. U.S.A.: The Burton Club, n.d.
  • Galland, Antoine, trans. (1965). Les Mille et Une Nuits: Contes arabes. 12 vols. 1704-17. Ed. Jean Gaulmier. 3 vols. Paris: Garnier-Flammarion, 1990, 1985, 1991.
  • Hamori, Andras. (1975). On the Art of Medieval Arabic Literature. 1974. Princeton: Princeton UP.
  • Kilito, Abdelfattah. (1992). L'Œil et l'aiguille: Essai sur "les mille et une nuits." Textes à l'appui: série islam et société. Paris: Editions la Découverte.
  • Skeat, W. W. (1988). An Etymological Dictionary of the English Language. 1879-1882. Oxford: Clarendon Press.


(9/6/95)

Magazine 2 (2004): 7-18.
[This paper was first read in slightly different form at the STASIS Conference, Auckland University, on 9 June, 1995, under the title “Barth, Borges and the Poetics of Stasis in The Thousand and One Nights." That version is available online at: http://dinarzade.blogspot.co.nz/2007/09/chapter-5-poetics-of-stasis.html]

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Saturday

Iain Sharp: The Singing Harp (2004)



Raewyn Alexander, ed.: Magazine 2 [aroha, love, l’amour] (November 2004)


Iain Sharp, The Singing Harp, Wellington: Earl of Seacliff Art Workshop, 2004. ISBN 1-86942-036-5. 28 pp.



Iain Sharp: The Singing Harp (2004)

Two million words ago, before he became a journalist, he used to want to be a poet. God knows why.

There’s a scene in the Scorsese movie The King of Comedy where the de Niro character finally succeeds in getting his stand-up routine on TV. We’ve been assuming all along that the reason for his failure is that he’s a lousy comedian, but now we realise that he’s actually pretty good – it’s just that his material is so painful and self-loathing that people can’t deal with it.

Iain Sharp, too, can be extremely amusing. Anyone who’s heard him will testify to the effectiveness of his stand-up act. Judging by the older pieces included here, in his “first book of verse since 1985” – “The Splog,” for example, or “The Ponsonby Strut” (“Martian canals in your eyeballs / cardboard wine in your gut; / that’s how you do the Ponsonby strut”) – that’s always been true. Why, then, does he hate himself, and poetry, so much? Mostly (presumably) it comes from a genuine loathing of pretension. “I, too, dislike it,” as Marianne Moore said of Poetry with a capital “P.” There are, after all, moments when Sharp permits himself a timid validation of some of what he sees around him:
The small things that sustain us: Nadia
Salerno-Sonnenberg playing ragtime violin

over the starlings’ chatter as I sip lemon
juice … (“New Year Benediction”)

His book reads like Sam Beckett trying to ape Cole Porter. Funny, yes; clever, yes; but dark … It must be those two million words getting revenge.


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Friday

Campana to Montale: Introduction (2004)


Kendrick Smithyman: Campana to Montale: Versions from Italian, ed. Jack Ross (2004)

Introduction

A man cannot say ‘I will translate’, any more than he can say ‘I will compose poetry’.
– Helen Waddell, Mediaeval Latin Lyrics (1929)



Mary de Rachewiltz: Discretions (1971)


The catalyst was a dual-text “Italian issue” of Poetry Australia (22/23) from 1968. When Kendrick Smithyman finally got around to reading it in the early eighties, his response to some rather clumsy literal versions by Mary and Walter de Rachewiltz – Ezra Pound’s daughter and son-in-law – was to growl, “I could do better.”

He proceeded to prove his point on the poems included there, then started to ransack all the other Italian anthologies and single-author translations he (or, after his retirement from the English Department in 1987, his wife Margaret Edgcumbe) could find on the shelves of Auckland University Library.[1]

The result was a massive collection of 211 poems, translated from 15 different Italian modernists, ranging in time from Dino Campana (1885-1932) to the still active Eglio Pagliarani (1927- ). The scope of this enterprise still seems astonishing, especially when one considers that he spoke little or no Italian, and therefore had to work from the half-truths of “literal” versions – and other translators.

By 1993, he was ready to submit the collection for publication – first to Auckland University Press, then Carcanet in Manchester. Neither proved able to take it. I first found out about these Versions from Italian (as he entitled them) shortly after his death in 1995, when Professor D. I. B. Smith lent me his own copy of the typescript.


So what are the poems like? Sheer bulk is no guarantee of success, and the nowadays-not-infrequent practice of translating from languages one doesn’t know could hardly be said to inspire an unquestioning confidence. I don’t think I can improve here on what I said about them in my essay “Smithyman in Italian,” published in Landfall 197 (1999):

I feel that [these translations] liberated a side of Smithyman which was at times obscured by the conscious artifice, the ironic masks of so much of his poetry. They are, I would suggest, best read thus – as a substantial addition to the canon of his own work, rather than a window on the Italians. [73]


Take Eugenio Montale as a case in point:

The gusts grow stronger, the dark is torn to bits
and the shadow which you cast on fretwork railings
creases and curls. Too late

if you want to be yourself. From a palm tree
a rat catapults, a flash of lightning plays about
a transformer,
about the so very long lashes of your glance.

That’s “Promenade by the Sea,” Smithyman’s version of “Lungomare” (1940):

Il soffio cresce, il buio è rotto a squarci,
e l’ombra che tu mandi sulla fragile
palizzata s’arriccia. Troppo tardi

se vuoi esser te stessa! Dalla palma
tonfa il sorcio, il baleno è sulla miccia,
sui lunghissimi cigli del tuo sguardo
.[2]

This “little madrigal” – Montale’s own description – is no standard love lyric. The images intersect in characteristically oblique fashion. What, for example, does “il baleno è sulla miccia” actually mean? Literally, it means “the lightning is on the fuse.” But in context? Nobody ever claimed that Montale was easy …

Let’s turn for pointers to another translation of Montale, the bilingual version of La bufera ed altro [The Storm and Other Things] (1956) – alas, that choice of title already gives us pause – by William Arrowsmith:

The air quickens, the darkness is shreds,
and your shadow falling on the frail
fence curls. Too late

if you want to be yourself! The fieldmouse
plops from the palm, lightning’s at the fuse,
on the long, long lashes of your gaze.[3]

Here we begin to see what the poem is doing – how the coming storm echoes a nascent passion: “lightning’s at the fuse, / on the long, long lashes of your gaze.” I don’t much like “plops from the palm” – too excremental – and while “sorcio” is definitely a mouse rather than a rat, “fieldmouse” sounds a little too cosy. For all that, when I first encountered them, Arrowsmith’s beautiful grey-backed volumes of translations looked like the best Montale could hope for in English.

Back to Smithyman’s version. At first sight, all seems strange. The seascape is there, but the fuse has become the intensely quotidian and concrete “transformer.” Is that really correct? Isn’t the fuse meant to be more abstract? No matter, the clichéd “long lashes of your glance” (so much better than “gaze”) are now justified by the precise details preceding them (the rat catapults – yes!), and by the consciously awkward “so very long lashes.” To put it crudely, Arrowsmith’s is a translation which sends us back to the original with new insights; Smithyman’s is a poem unafraid to depart from that original to give a more vivid sense of this literally electric scene.

Special pleading, do you think? After all, as I mentioned above, Kendrick couldn’t speak Italian, and his typescripts for these translations are consequently a nightmare of industry – each line of the unknown language has been typed out painstakingly with a literal version underneath (dictionary definitions in the margins). A page like this was succeeded by an English text, which was then worked on until it began to find the shaping and line divisions of the poem within.

Paradoxically, I would claim that this very distance from the poets he was interpreting forced him to rely more on his own vision, his own self-expression through the poems.


So much for Montale (my favourite among the Italian moderns). It’s important to stress, however, that Kendrick’s own preference was for Salvatore Quasimodo, a far less urbane figure. In fact, he ended up translating more than half of Quasimodo’s collected works: 132 out of 195 poems. The nearest rivals are Montale and Sandro Penna (26 and 22 poems, respectively).

So why Quasimodo? What was it about him that spoke to Smithyman particularly? If what Helen Waddell says in the quotation above is true, then a poet’s choice of who to translate ought to say a good deal about both of them:

Christ’s lice! What do you expect?
Nothing in the world changes, and Man
proclaiming love and discord still shrugs
his raven wings closer together
against the rain. From the beginning
you’ve never wanted for blood. Only a sheep
with scruffy head and salt-packed eyes
turned round on the way back.
But nothing happens. Moss on its walls
is firstcome chronicle of a city
of some remote farflung archipelago.
– Quasimodo, “Altra risposta


I’ve been amusing myself by drawing up a table of comparisons between Quasimodo and his counterpart in our “remote farflung archipelago:”

Salvatore Quasimodo / Kendrick Smithyman

Q: Born in Modica (near Ragusa) in 1901, but moves to Sicily at the age of seven. /
S: Born in Te Kopuru (near Dargaville) in 1922,
but moves to Auckland at the age of ten
.


Q: After studying in Rome, lives most of his life in Milan, with brief intervals away. /
S: After studying in Auckland,
lives most of his life there, with brief intervals away
.


Q: Doesn’t join the Resistance during the Second World War, though he espouses anti-fascist attitudes. /
S: Joins the army during the Second World War,
but is stationed at home and on Norfolk Island
.


Q: Early, lyrical love poems give way to tortured asceticism, then a resonant political identification with the Italian people during the war. /
S: Early, self-doubting love poems give way to daunting intellectualism,
then an increasingly relaxed sense of place and people from the sixties onwards
.

Some similarities at once stand out. Both poets came from the backblocks (Sicily; Te Kopuru) to the metropolis, and for both this remained a dominant theme. Both had rather muted war service, apparently preferring the role of spokesperson to Byronic (d’Annunzio-esque) man-of-action. Despite some striking successes in that genre, both found the role of love poet difficult to sustain. The differences, though, are even more striking:

Quasimodo is a poet transformed by crisis. His early work, collected in Ed è subito sera [Suddenly, Evening] (1942), was fierce enough. The indignation of these poems at the fact of death: death of love, destruction of the natural world, immediately distinguished him from his more Hermetic contemporaries. However, it was the Second World War which really defined him. The editor of his complete poems remarks: “While remaining antifascist, he [didn’t] take an active part in the resistance.”[4] All that changed in 1946-47, with the issue of his collection of war poems Giorno dopo giorno [Day after day], welcomed for its assertion of a “reclaimed human dignity.”[5] It won him a Nobel Prize in 1959.

Smithyman, on the other hand, is a poet bound up by landscape (particularly the Northland he grew up in and continually revisited), and language (the convolutions and ambiguities of English syntax) – a writer intensely suspicious of grand attitudes and romantic self-aggrandisement. No Nobel prize for him. No activist posturing during the Vietnam war. And yet, it’s interesting to contrast the Quasimodo poem quoted above with Smithyman’s “Ambush:”

It happens like that, you are not prepared
for
bursts of automatic fire dadadida,
then a single shot da from unseen marksmen
kingfishers, targeting. It happens
like that, as suddenly, a bagatelle and no
one is to blame if fear is all
mixed up with loving.[6]

“Fear is all / mixed up with loving.” The sheep, the lice, the raven in Quasimodo are props – bits of realia brought in to illustrate a point. The “kingfishers, targetting” in Smithyman seem more tangible than his bullets.

What the two poets have in common is a sense of drama, of intensity. Quasimodo, however, has what Smithyman lacks – a belief in his own historical mission, which enables him to transform particularities into a larger set of parables about love and death and war. It would be pompous for Smithyman to assert such grandiosity. Ventriloquising Quasimodo, could it at last, perhaps, seem legitimate?

That’s, at any rate, how I interpret the late poem “Reading Quasimodo:”

remembering (thinking I remembered?)
(I’d been reading Quasimodo) reading about
night, when bombers came.

Gunfire downriver announced:
noise, in what folk formerly called
“the Heavens”, as though it were all
an oldfashioned playhouse, open to
elements. We waited moonrise, the moon rose
flowering past cross stations, beyond simile.
It was the moon. It did not flower.

The bombers came. They were bombers
not monotone birds. They’d no fine feathers.
They let fall neither eggs nor untimely dung.
They were searching the river, they found
the river. They looked for docks, ware
houses, power plants. In their foreign language
they droned, tediously debating.

We burned angrily. That was the night
the sugar refinery flared, and ran.
Tenders, men with hoses, trapped
in floods of toffee, baked, charred,
glazed, innocent of carnival.

Incendiaries fell in course.
Some wasted among park trees, some in roosts
on storage depots, factories, wharf sheds,
fragmented. Flocks shocked by noise dazed
by lights caught fire, rose and flew.
Sparks did not fly like birds, they were birds.

Truly, we did this, we saw that? Truly, we did.[7]

The poem is a maze of contradictions, of memories cancelling each other out. “the moon rose / flowering past cross stations, beyond simile. / It was the moon. It did not flower.” Did the moon rise flowering? No, of course it didn’t. It was the moon. Moons don’t “flower.” “The bombers came. They were bombers / not monotone birds.” They weren’t birds, they had no feathers, they didn’t lay eggs or “untimely dung” – they were bombers. They dropped bombs.

“Beyond simile” is the key phrase here. When experience becomes ungraspable, unbelievable, it becomes pointless to look for analogies. How can one define the indefinable? How can one believe that such things happened? “Truly, we did this, we saw that?” They did. “Truly, we did.” They do.

The sparks “did not fly like birds,” they were birds.



We get the sort of poetry we deserve,
all mass-produced stuff, easy to take,
so eager to please! It carries gloves
because scared to shake hands
though dirty enough to upset the censor.
A poetry for unmarried ladies,
also for those who are just a bit butch.
It gets by in an age of rocket launchers
and sudden (or false) alarms.
– Nelo Risi, “Le muse sono stanche

Kipling said that once you knew how to do something, it was time to try to do something you couldn’t. In many ways, late Smithyman was in his most experimental phase, most anxious to attempt the peaks he’d never managed before. Quasimodo, then, can be seen as one of the vehicles he employed to express the hitherto inexpressible: moral indignation, rage against pain and injustice – those things we want so desperately to say but which have a tendency to choke us the moment we begin.

Nor, significantly, was that the Italian’s only tone of voice:

You have bent your head, you eye me.
Your dress is white,
one breast flowers from the lace
lying loose from your left shoulder.

The light overcomes me; it trembles,
falling on your naked arms.
Quasimodo, “E la tua vesta è bianca

You will not find elsewhere in Kendrick Smithyman’s work this direct, lyrical intensity – this shameless celebration of the sensuous and passionate …

“Do you need us, World, to query your answers? / Actually, do you need us” (“Mitimiti and Gaia”[8]). Are they good translations? Yes, I think they are. But more than that, they’re an essential part in the jigsaw puzzle (Atua Wera, Last Poems, Imperial Vistas Family Fictions) which is gradually revealing to us the full extent of the lifework of one of New Zealand’s greatest poets.



Note on the Text

My copytext has remained the typescript Versions from Italian prepared for Auckland University Press (the same text sent subsequently to Carcanet in Manchester) lent to me by Professor D. I. B. Smith in 1995. I have, however, collated it with the fuller set of typescripts owned by Margaret Edgcumbe, his literary executor (now housed in the Special collections department of Auckland University Library), endeavouring in all cases to ascertain the poet’s latest intentions.

This book includes all the Italian poems translated by Kendrick Smithyman from the mid-eighties till (approximately) 1993 – including a few late ones by Quasimodo which presumably postdated the Smith typescript. Wherever possible I have compared them with their Italian originals, adjusting some titles, but have otherwise contenting myself with correcting accidentals and faults of orthography.

The ordering in the first section, Campana to Montale, is entirely Smithyman’s, except that I’ve printed together two originally separated poems by Luciano Erba. In the case of the second section, Quasimodo, I’ve made some slight adjustments in the order to accord with the latest (1995) edition of the poet’s collected works. I’ve also added titles for the various volumes the poems originally came from.




Notes:

1. Among others: Contemporary Italian Poetry: An Anthology, ed. Carlo L. Golino (Berkeley: U of California P, 1962); Eugenio Montale, It Depends: A Poet’s Notebook, trans. G. Singh (New York: New Directions, 1980); The Selected Writings of Salvatore Quasimodo, ed. Allen Mandelbaum (New York: Farrar, Straus & Cudahy, 1960); This Strange Joy: Selected Poems of Sandro Penna, trans. W. S. Di Piero (Columbus: Ohio State UP, 1982).
2. Eugenio Montale, Tutte le Poesie, a cura di Giorgio Zampa, 1984 (Milano: Mondadori, 1991) 198.
3. Eugenio Montale, The Storm and Other Things, trans. William Arrowsmith (New York: Norton, 1985) 23.
4. Salvatore Quasimodo, Tutte le poesie, ed. Gilberto Finzi (Milano: Mondadori, 1995) xxii: “Pur essendo antifascista, non prende parte attiva alla Resistenza. Tuttavia, nel ‘44, viene denunciato da una nota spia fascista.”
5. “ritrovata dignità umana” – Tutte le poesie, xxii.
6. Kendrick Smithyman, Auto/Biographies (Auckland: Auckland University Press, 1992) 24.
7. Kendrick Smithyman, Collected Poems IX: 1985-87 [unpublished] (20.7.85).
8. Auto/Biographies, 18.



(31/3/04)

Kendrick Smithyman. Campana to Montale: Versions from Italian. Edited by Jack Ross. ISBN 0-476-00382-2. [ii} + 190 pp (Auckland: The Writers Group, 2004): 10-17.

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Kendrick Smithyman: Campana to Montale (2004)