Showing posts with label 2009. Show all posts
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Monday

Scroll, Codex, Hypertext (2009)



Floating Cinemas Website

Scroll, Codex, Hypertext ...



The only way I can think of to try to understand a paradigm shift when you're in the middle of one is to look for previous examples.

It's important to remember that earlier technologies have a tendency to leave fossilised remnants of themselves preserved inside the new one. Take the shift from scroll to book in late antiquity, for instance. Scrolls are hard to store and very limited in length. The book-divisions in Homeric epics, for instance, tell us how many scrolls it took to write out each poem: 24.

Hollywood movies have accustomed us to see them as continuous strips of print, unrolled vertically like a teleprompter. In fact they were generally read horizontally, with a series of columns unfolding across the exposed area. It was no great stretch to transfer this idea of columns of writing into the idea of separate pages in a book. Sewing or gluing pages into a book (or a codex, to use the technical term) is, however, extremely labour-intensive, and there was therefore a long period of overlap when the two co-existed.



We talk about internet pages, and we speak of scrolling down them. In other words, our ways of thinking about writing in the new medium are still imagined in terms of the technologies familiar to us. We still prefer reading down rather than across - the idea of linking computer screens to make a larger display area should probably be seen as more analogous to fold-out pages in an illustrated book than to any real re-imagination of the medium.

Page design and layout, fonts, chapters and titles, these all come with us as we attempt to transfer our means of expression into the electronic media. At present, in fact, given the tendency of electronic storage systems to decay or become obsolete within a few decades (or even a few years) - also given our lessened attention spans in front of a screen - the technology of the internet actually has more analogies with that of the scroll than that of the book.

Cross-referencing and footnoting is definitely easier on webpages, though. The idea of hypertext, of point and click, while still clearly a development of the concept of indexing, will undoubtedly revolutionise our ways of thinking about information-transfer over time.

I guess the easiest way to talk about my own thinking and responses to the challenges of this new medium is to refer to the experiments I've made to date in how to construct literary texts - and, especially, narratives - in a way that makes some use of its innovations.




My first novel, Nights with Giordano Bruno (Wellington: Bumper Books, 2000), is a meditation on the physical possibilities of the book, or rather, the idea of a single page within a book. It consists of a number of discontinuous texts, scattered throughout according to a set of numerical formulae. No one page follows on from the page before, but each of the various stories can be followed reasonably easily if you care to search for the next page in the sequence. Alternatively, you can read it straight through as a kind of textual mosaic.




When I decided to try and transfer my book to the internet in 2007, I was forced to regard the pages as individual computer pages, hyperlinked to a table of contents which enabled them to be regrouped into their constituent stories. The ease with which this could be accomplished online, though, negated some of the resistanceBruno website, then, while it physically copies the book's text and internal arrangements, could not be said to do the same for the initial reasoning behind that arrangement.




My next novel, The Imaginary Museum of Atlantis (Auckland: Titus Books, 2006), again tried to play with the physical form of a book in what I then saw as innovative ways. Again I used the idea of the individual page, but this time I arranged the text as two separate but intersecting sequences, an alphabetical encyclopedia of Atlantean lore running one way, and a series of automatic writings running in the other direction. Each spread, then, contains two pages different ways up. The reader is forced to decide which way to go when reading it (though, again, it can also be read as a series of mosaics rather than sequentially).




The website I designed for the book attempted to echo this arrangement by arranging the pages on two separate blogs, each hyperlinked and cross-referenced to the other. The physical book already contained a series of putative hyperlinks in the form of footnotes, but of course I was now able to make these "real" hyperlinks, and to join them up in the pre-designed sequences I'd originally had in mind. The book, then, while still primary, has been in some ways re-imagined in its new incarnation. They complement each other, rather than simply echoing each other's form.




The third novel in what I'd now taken to calling my trilogy (the R.E.M. - or "Random Excess Memory" - trilogy), EMO (Auckland: Titus Books, 2008), was based around the idea of crossing the page. Before the advent of cheap, acid-based paper in the mid to late nineteenth century, it was quite common for people writing letters to write vertically down the page, and then turn it round and write the other way, horizontally. Correspondents became quite adept at deciphering such texts, and I wondered if it would be possible to do something analogous on the pages of a book. Could one have, in fact, a literal subtext to the master narrative marching down the page?




The interesting thing to me about this experiment is that it was dictated by my decision to try and compose an internet novel, rather than the other way round. The electronic version of the text preceded its physical manifestation. I wrote a series of texts in the form of separate blogs (I'm addicted to blogs - as you may have noticed - for their cheapness, their easy accessibility, but also, somewhat paradoxically, for their technical limitations. They focus one's mind on the simple problems of textual transmission in a way that a more flexible platform might not). I then hyperlinked my fictional texts to other, "underlying" texts in the hopes of setting up a kind of double-focus in the reader's mind.




My latest experiment has, however, moved away from simply presenting chapters of fictional prose as online pages. Instead I've decided to try and tell a story through pre-existing textual paradigms, specifically online course outlines and lecture notes, a kind of information I've spent a good deal of time working on as part of my job (here's an example: the website for my stage three course in Travel Writing).

I therefore wrote and compiled two fictional course-outlines, Banned Books & Crisis Diaries: each complete with reading lists, lecture schedules, and assignment outlines. The novella I ended up writing (due out from Titus Books next year as part of a larger volume of short fiction) masqueraded as a folder of notes compiled by the teacher of these two courses.

It's titled, accordingly, Coursebook found in a Warzone, and is set in a slightly future version of right here. The putative author of the texts in this folder may have been killed by a sniper, or he may simply have lost his briefcase while crossing the war-torn city (I imagine it a little like 80s Beirut or 90s Sarajevo ... or perhaps modern Baghdad). In any case, the story comes to an abrupt stop. That's one of the reasons that it's subtitled "A Whodunit." There are numerous hints throughout at the author's guilt - or at any rate complicity - in certain crimes. Unusually for the detective genre, though, the crime may be harder to identify here than the culprit.




I think the advantage of this new twist on the internet-as-writing-medium is that it makes use of the kinds of texts which already exist online. Readers of my novella can easily consult the course outlines online, but that won't necessarily help them in understanding the nature of the story. Just as Samuel Richardson in the eighteenth century first wrote a set of letters as an educational primer to polite discourse, then, captivated by the possibilities of the form, composed the world's first epistolary novel, I think it's more interesting to adapt aspects of one's writing to the dictates of the new medium than simply to use it as a mirror of the old.


Giordano Bruno (Campo dei Fiori, Rome)



(3/12/09)

Floating Cinemas Website (7 December, 2009)
[Available at: http://floatingcinemas.blogspot.com/2009/12/scroll-codex-hypertext.html]

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Flying Blind (3/12/09)






Sunday

Troubling Our Sleep (2009)



Murray Edmond, ed.: Ka Mate Ka Ora

Troubling Our Sleep:
Ted Jenner’s Postmodern Classicism


A review-essay



Ted Jenner: Writers in Residence (2009)


Ted Jenner, Writers in Residence and Other Captive Fauna. ISBN 978-1-877441-09-7. 130 pp. Auckland: Titus Books, 2009.

The thought of what America,
The thought of what America,
The thought of what America would be like
If the Classics had a wide circulation...
Oh well!
It troubles my sleep.

(Ezra Pound, ‘Cantico del Sole’, 1984, 183)


i. The Masks of Catullus

Ezra Pound’s 1918 poem ‘Cantico del Sole’ was prompted by a ‘recent decision’ from ‘a learned judge’ that some
approved publications at times escape [the law on obscene publications] only because they come within the term ‘classics,’ which means, for the purpose of the application of the statute, that they are ordinarily immune from interference, because they have the sanction of age and fame and USUALLY APPEAL TO A COMPARATIVELY LIMITED NUMBER OF READERS [Pound’s capitals]. (Pound 1984, 183)

Donald Gallup, the editor of Pound’s Collected Shorter Poems, adds that he ‘considered the matter far too serious to be written of in anger’; hence his choice of the ‘cadences of the “Cantico del Sole” of St. Francis of Assisi’ (184).

I think it’s fair to say that the Classics still retain these associations for a lot of readers today: an atmosphere of shameless sexual licence, of animal-like pursuit of pleasure without pangs of conscience, lightly concealed by ‘the sanction of age and fame’ (pretty much the Church’s propaganda line during the first few centuries AD).

No doubt that’s why they’ve proved such a boon to rebellious, anti-puritan poets throughout the modern era. The fact that (as Pound’s ‘learned judge’ put it) they’re ‘ordinarily immune from interference’ permits a kind of verbal extremism which may shock readers but which is unlikely to lead to actual prosecution. The court-cases which muzzled Baudelaire’s Les Fleurs du Mal and Flaubert’s Madame Bovary left a long shadow. Nor were such trials solely a nineteenth-century phenomenon. Max Harris, the magazine editor who first published the works of the mythical Ern Malley, was convicted of obscenity by an Australian court as late as 1945.

The first-century-BC Latin poet Catullus, arguably the greatest extremist of all, has accordingly proved a favourite mask for a number of contemporary writers (including not a few New Zealanders): Catullus the no-holds-barred satirist, the ultimate connoisseur of love’s extremes, the enemy of wowsers everywhere – a kind of antique poète maudit, without the boulevardier affectations …

Take James K. Baxter’s sequence ‘after Catullus’ (from his posthumous 1973 collection Runes), for instance. He called it ‘Words to Lay a Strong Ghost’, and that appears to be just what it’s designed to do.
Looking at my journey’s end –
Two breasts like towers – the same face
That brought Troy crashing
Down like a chicken coop – black wood and flames!
1 – The Party (Baxter 1974, 3)

It’s a very masculine view of the end of a love affair. There she is, still vamping the men, and here I am, left licking my wounds at the back of the chicken coop …

The usual advantage of a sequence of poems is that different points of view can be admitted. Baxter allows us only the most limited insights into Pyrrha’s world, however: her sorrow (like Lesbia’s) at the death of a budgie (‘Partly on account of / The bird, and partly for herself’ (1974, 6). For the most part, though, ‘Pyrrha doesn’t talk’ (4) and this appears, in context, to be seen as a good thing.

Having said that, one of the most interesting things about Baxter’s group of poems, besides the obvious transpositions of Catullus’s sophisticated urban world into a contemporary New Zealand scene of pub flagons and rugby matches, is his daring interpretation of Catullus 63, the famous hymn to Cybele. Baxter interprets this as a first-person statement on the poet’s part, rather than an imaginative leap into the persona of one of the goddess’s self-castrated eunuch priests:
It is not women only
Who lose themselves in the wound of love –
When Atthis ruled by Cybele
Tore out his sex with a flint knife,

He became a girl. Blood fell
In flecks on the black forest soil –
So it was for me, Pyrrha,
And the wound will ache, aches now …

Love’s suffering can literally make a man into a girl, it seems, forcing him:
To live in
Exile from the earth I came from,
Pub, bed, table, a fire of hot bluegum,

The boys in the bathing shed playing cards –
It’s hard to live on Mt Ida
Where frost bites the flesh
And the sun stabs at the roots of trees,

No longer a man – Ah! don’t let
Your lion growl and run against me,
Cybele’s daughter – I accept
Hard bondage, harder song!
8 – The Wound (Baxter 1974, 11)

This promising intimation of sexual ambivalence isn’t, unfortunately, followed up on in C.K. Stead’s ‘Clodian Songbook’ (published in various instalments from 1982 onwards). These are (as he explains in the notes to Between (1988):
not translations but sometimes versions, sometimes approximations, sometimes poems which use the Roman poet only as a stepping-off point for going in a different direction. The persona is neither Catullus nor myself, but a shifting fictional identity somewhere between. (Stead 2008, 525)

‘A shifting fictional identity somewhere between’ is a pretty essential artefact for a satirist of contemporary culture and mores, and that does seem to be one of the most useful attributes of Catullus for Stead:
Suffenia, feminist in fiction
and Tullius Tuhoe,
walk off with the Book Awards
and Catullus chalks up another defeat.

Gender and race combine
like an All Black front row –
unstoppable!

Biting stuff! ‘Gender and race’ the criteria for cultural success in New Zealand in the 1980s! Lest we miss the point, it’s reinforced by the poem’s conclusion:
Yes yes they are deserving.
Certainly they are the best –
as much and as truly the best
among our writers
as it is true to say
Catullus is the worst. (227-28)

So what you’re saying is, you (or ‘Catullus’) are not really the worst of our writers, Dr. Stead, so it’s not really true that they’re the best, either? I see. Horace and Juvenal weren’t always particularly subtle in their choice of targets either.

Stead does borrow from Baxter, however – as well, of course, as from their common original – a refreshing and (at times) quite enlightening sexual frankness:
‘It may not be God exactly’
Clodia tells me
lying back among sheets
in an unwonted moment
of unwanton wonder
‘but there’s something up there’ (224)

Increasingly, though, his various masks of Catullus tend to resolve into a kind of stoic voice of mourning, as the years go by and the friends (and lovers) drop off. ‘Cat/ullus’, for instance:
Zac’s dead
buried with his brother Wallace
beside the carport
under the pongas.

Zac of the goldfish eyes
and nice-smelling fur
who when I had a problem with a poem
slept on it,
who lived to put his paw-print
on a valued citation (366-67)

A certain witty appositeness there in praising your cat for helping you find the right quotation at the right time! The voice also enables him to get over his awkwardness at having to elegise his poetical elders – Allen Curnow, for instance:
And though I cannot send you poems of my own
I offer this by my older friend Catullus
so you’ll know my boast of verses wasn’t idle.
Let it come to you, as it does in the Roman’s trope,
like an apple given to a girl, hidden in her clothes
and forgotten until it rolls to her mother’s floor
and has to be explained, and cannot be. (383)

Satire, elegy, love-longing, self-hatred, self-castigation: Catullus can clearly stand for a lot of things for our poets. But there’s no disputing that this is still firmly in the region of classical ‘circulation’ foreseen by Pound’s poem. Are there other ways of assuming ancient Roman (and Greek) personae in modern poetry, ways which don’t have such an automatically revisionist social and sexual agenda?

That, I would argue, is where Ted Jenner comes in. Here’s ‘Catullus reads a new poem aloud: Lesbia/Clodia fidgets’, from his first book of poems A Memorial Brass, published by Alan Loney’s Hawk Press in 1980:
My attention flickering – a cicada
on the window-sill (or ceiling
or crack in the wall)
just hear him catalogue those favours
of his minute after minute; despite
household spies, public benefactors,
threatened auctions of manuscripts,
breast-bands and chemises;
despite the one mature affair, and the
impossibility
of his love uncoiling again from its own
tension above the faded sienna bedspread:

even now there’s one eye cocked at eternity. (Jenner 1980, 15)

The idea of taking the woman’s side in the debate is not the only striking thing about this poem (it’s interesting how sedulously Stead, and Baxter before him, avoid this very feature – the utility of the Catullus mask for them appears to be that it gives them tacit permission not to explore their feminine side). The tone of voice here reminds one of the ultra-refined Court ladies in Pound’s Cathay (1915): ‘The Jewel Stair’s Grievance,’ for instance. It seems that it’s precisely the psychology of that ‘Other’ that Jenner is intent on exploring – whether it be, here (fleetingly) Catullus’s mistress, or (in the same book) the virtually non-existent ‘Sulpicius Lupercus Servasius Iunior’ – ‘a Roman poet of the 5th c. A.D. so obscure that the very form of his cognomen varies in ms. tradition’ (1980, 25). Not only does he not have a stable name, but ‘His sole surviving contributions to Latin literature consist of three Alcaic stanzas [...] and twenty-odd elegiac couplets (on the already well documented diseases of money-grubbing rhetoricians)’.

‘My attention flickering – a cicada / on the window-sill’. We see here the first intimations of Jenner’s abiding themes: a taste for the obscure and fragmentary (whether they lie concealed in Classical papyri or landscape details from Africa); a distrust of conventional romantic readings of the poet-as-hero (whether it be Catullus or Ezra Pound himself); and a love of the fleeting and evanescent as opposed to the fixed and stationary. Hence his distrust of Plato’s idealism; hence, too, his abiding love of Herakleitos and (to some extent) the more specific and rooted-in-the-actual Aristotle.

The territory that Jenner occupies as a poet, while on the surface not dissimilar from Baxter and Stead’s classical ventriloquising, is not dominated by the same need to sound hip and sexy. His Catullus can be fussy, erudite, complaining, Like them, Jenner veers between translation, adaptation and contrapuntal variations – as he says of his version of the Greek poet Ibykos in A Memorial Brass:
Of the pieces that comprise this sequence only the fourth could be considered a complete adaptation of an existing fragment. The remainder quote or expand upon selections from the fifty or so ‘nipped buds’ – lines, half-lines, phrases, a single word – that have survived in grammarians’ tomes or in scholiasts’ footnotes. (1980, 24)

Unlike his predecessors, however, Jenner is himself a Greek scholar, author of a number of learned articles on the interpretation of Ibykos’s texts, and the eventual author of a dual-text edition / translation of 22 of his fragments which appeared (with drawings by John Reynolds) from Holloway Press in 1997 as The Love-Songs of Ibykos.

These early poems do admittedly have a strong flavour of Ezra Pound – and to some extent of Basil Bunting – the same defamilarising precision of word and phrase (in the same way that Baxter and Stead recall to us the tone of Robert Lowell’s seminal 1961 book Imitations). The difference is that Jenner has persevered with his explorations of this classical indeterminacy and fragmentariness as a pre-condition of his writing. He doesn’t so much resolve his distant models as assert their intangibility.

Take, for example, his recent Sappho Triptych (Purriri Press, 2007). This veers from versions of the most familiar Sapphic fragments: ‘The Moon is in her cave / and the Pleiades have set’ (5) to a kind of transformative celebration of the conditions of our occupancy of this world:
Memory is the off-white eggshell colour of the walls of the local dispensary which smell of disinfectant; the odours of 'Reception' at 'Rustling Oaks' retirement village where the smell of carbolic competes with the stale redolence of a bowl of roses (Jenner 2007, 6)

How different from the frank, manly tone of Stead’s Roman elegies! A deliberate reversion to the cult of sentiment – The Man of Feeling – seems to be on the point of overwhelming us as we disappear into the flower-scented disinfectant of the retirement home.
It is the colour of the petals of Plumeria natalensis we picked in the botanical gardens and carefully pressed between the pages of the novel we returned to the municipal library long before it was even due (6)

A lovely sense of futility there. It was due back eventually – but not yet. All pleasures and emotions are fleeting, but is that really enough reason to anticipate their departure?
It is the colour of Basho's bamboo leaves blanched and etiolated by the autumn rains, which never materialised

The texture of the stalk of straw a herdsman in Niger spits out of his mouth in times of drought (6)

Bashō, yes, but how far from his Buddhist delight in the material world.

The smell of ichor, the substance that coursed through the veins of the Olympian gods and became, on the same day we realised that the gods were never going to return, the colourless fluid that oozes out of a suppurating ulcer. (7)

The moment we see that there are no gods, that same moment their divine blood turns into pus, or into:
The texture of a dry and friable fragment of papyrus newly unearthed in the sand of an ancient rubbish dump at Oxyrhynchus on the Nile; a tattered and perforated fragment which looks a little like the first draft of a work in progress by a particularly fastidious poet who valued the pumice as much as she valued her pen and ink (7)

We know of Sappho that her reputation as the ‘tenth muse’ of antiquity was based on nine lengthy books of poems, arranged (according to meter) after her death by the assiduous librarians of Alexandria. The processes of decay are seen here to have had the paradoxical effect of turning her into a modern, though. Her fragments now look ‘like the first draft of a work in progress [like Joyce’s Finnegans Wake?] by a particularly fastidious poet.’ What Sappho was is beyond our grasp. What Sappho is is a kind of mirror: a modern despite herself, through the accidents of history, and the unforeseeable coincidence of the modern taste for the sketchy and fragmentary.

The colour Sappho turns when she turns 'paler than dry grass', her ears 'hum', her forehead 'drips with sweat' and a mist veils her eyes – 'at such times / death isn't far from me', Sappho of Lesbos who was small and dark and sang of a girl whose hair seemed to have been spun out of filaments of sunlight ( 7)

The common strand in Jenner’s classicism and his response to particular landscapes: above all, those of the Africa where he spent many years as a teacher of Latin and Greek, is this devotion to the particularities of memory – and the simultaneous, contradictory truth that it cannot be preserved, kept for us, except (possibly) for the faintest intimations of texture and scent.

The value of the masks that he himself assumes resides, then, simply in this: that they neither pretend to reconstitute the reality of the ancient world, nor are they mere mirrors for the pubs, beds or bathing sheds of our own. For Jenner these shreds of ancient poetry remind us of our common conundrums: the fact that (as Herakleitos put it first) we ‘can not step twice into the same river,’ and yet (anticipating dialectic) that there may be, somehow, unity in opposites: ‘the path up and down is the same.’


ii. Writers in Residence


Having looked at these examples of Jenner’s poetry, let’s move on to his most recent publication, the main focus of this essay, Writers in Residence and Other Captive Fauna (2009). At first sight this is a far more expansive, less constitutionally fragmentary set of texts – less of a postmodern echo-chamber, and more of a set of Borgesian stories and parables.

It begins with a sequence of short prose works (one hesitates to call them ‘stories’, exactly, since that would imply a conventional narrative momentum which they largely lack – Jenner, in the notes at the back of his book, refers to them simply as ‘pieces’), with strange, punning titles: ‘Arthur’s Pass’ describes the complex trajectory of a jogger named Arthur as he travels – in memory as well as reality – around a set of suburban streets. ‘Doubtful Sound’ talks about a man’s attempt to reconstruct the reality of his writer neighbour (who happens to be working on a story-cycle called ‘Arthur’s Pass’) simply from the sounds of the space in the flat the one inhabits parallel to the other.

This sense of overhearing the writer at work – the writer thinking about himself writing, then extending this to imagining others thinking about him writing, then on to imagining them seeing it as a deficiency in him that he doesn’t spend enough time thinking about them, even envisaging them wanting him to recast their reality in his writing – may sound like a fairly conventional postmodern mise-en-abîme: a kind of Kiwi version of Robbe-Grillet’s Voyeur. And much in this early piece by Jenner would seem to support that reading. He mentions in his notes that ‘“Writers in Residence” […] ‘was begun and then abandoned in the 1980’s […] It was not until the new millennium that the series was revisited and expanded’ (128).
My neighbour's rooms are in reverse order to mine, a mirror image in fact with wooden steps at the left of the living-room instead of the right, and bathroom on left and bedroom on right – that is if you're looking from the rear of this block of flats, or, to be more precise, you're standing in the long, tree-lined grass behind our two flats at this late hour of the night, directly facing his living-room window, which is almost totally obscured by a combination of drawn curtains and washing hanging on the clotheslines, including a shirt of his oscillating gently on a coat-hanger suspended from a makeshift clothesline. (42)

That ‘oscillating shirt’ is the subject of an earlier piece in the series, ‘A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Shirt’. The intriguing thing about this kind of landscape precision in the description of a banal urban environment, though, is its lack of any particular sense of social comment or political engagement. That, I suspect, is why the series proved unfinishable in the 1980s and had to wait so long to be completed. The Marxist in Robbe-Grillet and the other stars of the nouveau roman – Marguerite Duras, Claude Simon, Nathalie Sarraute – could seldom be submerged for long. Jenner’s piece might seem to be about ‘suburban neurosis’ or some other buzz-word of the time, but actually his focus is quite different:
I see very little of my neighbour and hear even less, and yet we live so close to each other, close enough at times to shake hands if, for example, we met on our respective stairs, separated as they are only by a thin partition wall, or if we faced each other in our adjacent bathrooms, standing at our back-to-back, reverse-order washstands, acknowledging each other instead of nodding to ourselves in our respective mirrors before swishing water over our hands and faces and listening to it curling and gurgling at the plughole with its characteristic gutturals only just audible above the drone of the long-haul juggernauts on the motorway. (42-43)

Kafka’s late story ‘The Burrow’, about a mole-like creature whose efforts to create the perfect underground lair are gradually undermined by his own self-doubt and paranoia, might be a better model than the nouveau roman for the nature of Jenner’s imagination here. Jenner’s protagonist’s peace of mind is destroyed by the fact that he’s become aware of this proximity, of the strangeness of living so close, inverted into the folds of another’s body, almost – and yet remaining apart. It’s interesting (parenthetically) that there’s been no mention of the gender of this secret listener up to now, leading readers (or this reader, at any rate) to fall into the easy genre-assumption of a woman overhearing the activities of a contiguous yet paradoxically separate man.
Pacing back and forth in my bedroom upstairs or living-room downstairs in 20-30 minute sessions each evening, up and down without deviation as though following a figure in the carpet, or, in my case, the knots and grains in the floorboards, I often have to ask myself if I don't cover as much ground in half an hour as the jogger who makes a regular circuit of the surrounding streets at nightfall. And I sometimes wonder if I don't hear more of this jogger than my own neighbour who can be heard ascending or descending his fourteen wooden steps at irregular intervals but might remain silent, seated at his living-room table, for three or four hours at a stretch, writing. My neighbour, you see, is a writer, and a reasonably serious one at that. Three to four hours, I tell you, almost motionless but for the fugitive fingers tapping a soundless devil's tattoo on the keys of his laptop. (43)

The jogger (needless to say) is ‘Arthur’ – or some simulacrum thereof. It makes sense that both this listening neighbour and the writer would overhear the same things, overlooking, as they do, the self-same streets. Where the one creates a character, the other notes a kind of social fixture.
His writing consists almost entirely of sketches and short fiction, if the cancelled manuscripts I keep finding in his dustbin are anything to go by. But here's the interesting question concerning all this writing, the one I cannot resist. Does he model any of his characters on the habits and personalities of his immediate neighbours? The fifteen to twenty fictional characters said to be baptised somewhere in the Southern Hemisphere every second can't all be drawn purely out of the writer's imagination. Surely the vast majority of them emerge from personal observations – a shrewd smile or an unnerving frown, a fleeting gesture, the face in a crowd that stares at you and won't let go, the intriguing behaviour of the man next door who seems to be spending an inordinate amount of time outside your kitchen or living-room window in the guise of sweeping up grass or leaves on the front path. And yet I've searched in vain for any trace of myself in his discarded 'literature'. The ingrate apparently ignores both his neighbour and the keen and even painstaking interest he takes in him. (43-44)

He takes in him.’ This doesn’t, in itself, preclude a romantic twist – a man might fall in love with his “artistic” neighbour just as easily as a woman. But there seems to be more of a longing here to be him than to be with him. The listener wants to be the writer – is, in effect, the writer now, a writer recording his impressions of another writer, inspired to do so by that first writer’s persistent refusal to acknowledge him. Talk about the anxiety of influence! And the wry note in that side-comment about the ‘fifteen to twenty fictional characters’ born even in our remote hemisphere shows (I think) both the young and the mature Jenner’s despair at the thought of adding more to an already-overstocked menagerie.
Aloof, intractable, deliberately (affectedly?) enigmatic – that's the writer I know best, and he refuses to let me play even the slightest, the most indirect, role in New Zealand literature. Now perhaps you can see why I intend to wait for him one evening, stride out on to the verandah as soon as I hear his key turn in the lock and ask him point-blank, Will you finish ‘Arthur's Pass’ tonight? Or have you started something new? And he will turn towards me, slowly, calmly at first, his eyes invisible behind the thick lens mottled by reflections of the dark, forbidding foliage surrounding us, and then suddenly, with his sparse and wiry tuft of a beard bobbing uncontrollably, his lips elongated, stretched thin by a string of plosives and sibilants, Please! Please! he'll protest, in a kind of tonic crescendo, Pleeese!! before pulling the door open with such force that he'll catch his nose on its sharp wooden edge and stagger into his flat, abusing me with a gamut of expletives. (44)

To the plethora of echoes I’ve already mentioned in my attempt to sum up the peculiar atmosphere and effect of this story, I think one now has to add Samuel Beckett. That ‘Pleeese!!’ has something of the effect of the bleaker moments in Krapp’s Last Tape. Jenner too clearly longs to play a ‘role in New Zealand literature’. Which of us, in the deepest recesses of ourselves, is innocent of such grandiose fantasies? Yet to go on from that to imagine oneself both as the pushy, intrusive stranger and the tuft-bearded, retreating writer takes a bitter intensity of self-knowledge which few self-portrait painters can muster. ‘Writers in Residence’ isn’t fun to read, exactly, but it’s horrifically funny in parts, relentlessly self-loathing and self-destructive in others, full – above all – of a curious poetic distillate of loneliness:
Eleven-thirty. Listen. A footstep on the stairs. And thirteen more buried within the drone of traffic on the motorway and water dripping from a kitchen tap and splashing in the sink with a sound like those large beads of water that sweat on the ceilings of ancient caves, seeping, constantly falling and shattering on the calcified floor. (44)

No real communication between people is possible in this brittle ‘calcified’ world of Ted Jenner’s. Even writers (and would-be writers) – though it’s doubtful there’s really much difference in the present scenario – can’t talk to one another, let alone the sketchy “Yvonne’s” and “Sue’s” who occasionally obtrude upon the action.
A minute after twelve. Now there is no sound in our respective flats except the sound of the drop of water which, at increasingly longer intervals, falls from a tap on my bath, splashes, pulverized, on the enamel of the bathtub, and dribbles into the drainpipe, conveying a dead fly, a family of drowned ants and several loose strands of wiry hair down into that chaos of primeval waters beneath the earth. (44)

I think, finally, of Georges Perec – of his magnificent reconstruction of the world of a Parisian apartment-block in La Vie mode d’emploi [Life: A User’s Manual]. He, too, leaves us with a vision of the subterranean world, the tunnels and sewers under the earth, the realm of the Magna Mater and all that darkness we’ve tried to exclude from our sanitised, pre-fabricated, freeze-dried living arrangements.


iii. A Brief History of the Muses

Ted Jenner’s work – his published work, at any rate – is admittedly sparse: five books, some quite slim, as the harvest of more than thirty years of writing. But that does have the effect of making us consider each piece extremely carefully. It certainly shouldn’t preclude us from taking him seriously.

Since this book, Writers in Residence, is the fullest he’s published – containing pieces from the whole span of his career – it invites the closest attention. The others might be accounted for simply as chips from a classical scholar’s workbench: some lovely yet fragmentary translations – and reconstructions of ancient remains so slight that it would be charitable to call them fragmentary. Here, though, he goes on the record once and for all.

Scott Hamilton, in his introduction to the book (now reprinted on his blog Reading the Maps) talks about his first reading, as a schoolboy, of Jenner’s ‘Progress Report on an Annotated Checklist for a Motuihe Island Gazetteer of Ethnographical Topology and Comparative Onomatography,’ included in Michael Morrissey’s pioneering 1984 anthology The New Fiction, and now reprinted in Writers in Residence.
Jenner’s extraordinary text made me realise for the first time that there is no Chinese Wall between different types of writing, and that the ‘technical’ languages of subjects like botany, linguistics and geography can be as poetic as Keats’ nightingale and Wordworth’s daffodils. (Hamilton)

Jenner himself, in an online interview, explains this text as presenting a minute description of the island of Motuihe in Auckland’s Hauraki Gulf as a microcosm of the history of New Zealand. Hamilton goes on to comment:
Even an attempt to make an exhaustive catalogue of the contents of a tiny piece of the world like Motuihe Island is doomed to failure, because reality is infinitely complex and continually in flux. To experience reality properly we need poetry, myth, and magic, as much as philosophy, philology and physics. Plato was wrong to want to exclude poets from his Republic.

Jenner’s horror of dogmatic ideology and rigid categories is reflected in his continual undermining of scholarly conventions and procedures. His texts show us the limits of our understandings of the world, and the inadvisability of using dogma to cover for our ignorance. More than a few of the pieces in Writers in Residence feature a narrator or monologuist whose pretensions to omniscience are gradually undermined, until confusion replaces certainty.

This description certainly helps us to understand texts as apparently diverse as ‘In Italy Take Care Not To Miss’ (Jenner 2009, 61-67) and ‘Athens: three Sketches – or what we missed in translation’ (68-69), with their parodies of the implicit paradox of the travel book or the tourist brochure. ‘Things can only happen once, not be repeated, as the brochure advises,’ as Jenner explains in the interview quoted from earlier. (Cross and Hamilton)

Uncertainty is one thing – whether it be the unreliability of translation, the fragility of transmission, the fatuity of conventional systems of information storage, or the intangibility of individual identity. There’s another level to these texts which accounts for their curious power.

“A Brief History of the Muses” is one of the strangest texts included in Writers in Residence. This prose-poem/pagework was first included in Jenner’s private-press chapbook Dedications in 1991, and is now reprinted on the last three pages of his new book, after a long series of landscape notes recorded during his lengthy stay as a teacher of classics in Malawi.

The form of the poem is complex. Each page has three sections of prose, divided by fragments of a drawing of three women, presumably ‘the Muses, of whom there were originally three, later nine with inflation in the various departments of arts and sciences,’ as Jenner explains helpfully in his notes at the end of the book (130). The various segments of these drawings rather resemble that child’s game where the first person draws a head, then folds the paper so that only the bottom of the neck can be seen; the next person draws the torso, then folds it over so that only the tops of the legs can be seen; and finally the last person draws the feet; after which the piece of paper is unfolded and the grotesquery of the finished item is revealed.

As for the text, Jenner’s notes explain that it was based on a lecture entitled ‘Feminism and Italian Avant-Garde Art’ where ‘poet Giulia Nicolai spoke of a secret alphabet in pre-literate Greece linked to the months of the year and invented, long before the Greeks modified the Phoenician symbols, by three priestesses of the Moon who each corresponded to one of the three lunar phases.’
a chain of molecules arranged in a certain order, and thanks to the mere fact of having an order, they had only to float in the midst of the disorder and immediately around her other chains were formed. (Their periods were heaven's fair new letters: first quarter, heaven's fair new letter C.) But in the
[…]
luminous colonies of the sea's depths, in the ribbons of kelp that began to emerge from the soft crust of embryonic continents, every now & then a swarm broke loose only to divide once again, repeat that sponge or polyp whence they came – mOOn over mushrOOms mOOn repeats itself in cycles: the
[…]
phases alternate, always the same. The great division within living beings had begun. (Their periods were heaven's fair new letters: full moon, heaven's fair new letter O.) Strictly through the mechanisms of tortoise-shell lyres and prosody, in a mirror-fingered dawn, the virgins reproduced them- (125)

This ‘unholy mixture of mythology and microbiology’ (to quote from one of Jenner’s notes on an another piece in his book) seems to envisage some kind of universal dance within nature itself, some inevitable sense in which the alphabet itself was born (like Aphrodite) literally – pun intended – from sea-foam. ‘C’ is (of course) our starting point: the new moon, the maiden, ‘first quarter, heaven’s fair new letter,’ rapidly modulating into ‘O’, the full moon, the matron: ‘The great division within living beings had begun.’ For the time being, though, ‘the virgins reproduced them-’
[…]
selves mOOn over tOwers mOOn. But between the part that transmits the orders of reproduction and the part that carries them out an irreconcilable gap has opened and they speak: 'Your sentence over, boys, you feel you have finished too soon, you feel uncomfortable and want to prolong the
[…]
gesture. If only your arms were so heavy that an appreciative sweep lasted 10 minutes, we should be saved from literature.' (Their periods were heaven's fair new letters: half moon, heaven's fair new letter D.) By now the battle is joined between those that believe and those that would like to be-
[…]
lieve. In the letters of their alphabet, however, everything has been registered: the stage is magically cleared of debris and the reborn Rockettes assume their traditional formations mOOn over tOwn mOOn. Strictly through the effects of architecture, in a mirror-clad dorm, the virgins reproduce them- (126)

And thus is born the battle of the sexes – the simultaneous attraction-repulsion between the masculine and feminine principle. This in its turn gives rise to ‘literature’, the division of the half moon D into the ‘man of letters’ while the virgins – ‘reborn Rockettes’ – remain apart ‘in a mirror-clad dorm.’ COD – Cash On Delivery? Or (reshuffled) OCD: Obsessive Compulsive Disorder? It’s perhaps helpful here to know that (as Wikipedia informs us):’the Rockettes have performed five shows a day, seven days a week, for 75 years’ since the group was first formed in 1925. ‘Their best-known routine is an eye-high leg kick in perfect unison in a chorus line, which they include at the end of every performance.’



[figure 1: Writers (2009)]


[…]
selves, heaven's fair new letters, last quarter, heaven's fair new letter ) suddenly breaks loose – could it be the gentle curve of their eyebrows in International Hotel lobbies or the soft chime of their circumflex accents in airport bars? But the material necessary for self-repetition shows signs
[…]
of becoming scarce, an irreconcilable gap is again opening between us, they cancel the last bold letter at the first quarter of the new moon, substitute (all phases apparent) 0, heaven's fair new asterisk, and accuse us of misinterpreting the polyvalence of their significations. 'For your vision has
[…]
become the housefly's fragmented perception, boys; thus we restore you to your freedom: call it the distance between your multiple footnotes and our whole configuration.' So we were left with mOOn Over fOOtnOtes mOOn as our letters repeat themselves in cycles, the phases alternate, always the same. (127)

You’ll note from the illustration included above that that closed bracket ‘)’should be a complete inverted C – but it’s not easy to find a way to reproduce that on a standard keyboard. The ‘0’ in the next paragraph, again, should be a capital ‘O’ (or a zero?) on its side. Unfortunately even the complete reprint of this page included (in full) as an erratum in the Titus edition of Jenner’s prose-poem has failed to restore the correct reading.

If you examine the earlier (1991) version of this text from Dedications (included below), you’ll note the discrepancy. “The phases alternate, always the same,” but “heaven’s new asterisk” was a set of interlocking half-circles in the form of an asterisk in the first printing.



[figure 2: Dedications (1991)]


Clearly this backwards ‘C’ represents the third part of the triple Moon goddess (Maiden / Matron / Crone) familiar to us from Western Matriarchal tradition. The ‘C’, the ‘O’ and the reversed ‘C’ serving as mirror images and (accordingly) completions of one another. The Dedications version ends with a reversal of this, though – the asterisk becoming a spiky inversion of the pattern: ‘an irreconcilable gap is again opening between us, they cancel the last bold letter at the first quarter of the new moon, substitute …’ – what do they substitute for that last bold letter? A COD (archaic term for joke)? A CODE (awaiting decipherment)? The asterisk makes more sense than the toppled zero in the 2009 version, but both, essentially, are stand-in letters, symbolic enactments of the ‘housefly's fragmented [many-eyed] perception, boys … call it the distance between your multiple footnotes and our whole configuration.’

Despite the many layers of complexity in Jenner’s text, its basic cyclical intention is clear enough – its mélange of Astronomical / Biological / Cultural alternations within a kind of cosmic flux. On the one hand one is reminded of the (equally conjectural) Druidic tree-alphabets in Robert Graves’ White Goddess; on the other hand, however, the echoes of pop culture (Rockettes) and the poetic canon (e. e. cumming’s destabilising ‘mOOn’ letters) seem just as crucial to the final effect. Literature – literally: ‘spelling things out in letters’ – has to be taken here as a kind of evolutionary original sin, leading to self-consciousness, conflict, guilt and all the other lovely legacies of Patriarchal tradition. At the same time, though, it opens up a magic realm of reproduction, possibility, and all the natural processes of change.

Is ‘A Brief History of the Muses’ to be construed, then, finally, as a hopeful text? I don’t know if that’s the kind of terminology so confirmed a sceptic as Ted Jenner would permit himself. But it’s certainly wildly funny (in parts at least). He remains a littérateur, a man of letters, dedicated to the transmission and thus perpetuation of memory. These lapidary fragments of translation and cultural / mythological tradition he has ‘shored against our ruins’ (Eliot 1980, 146) are not really, in the final analysis, compatible with a philosophy of the complete vanity of human wishes.

The virtue of Ted Jenner’s poetry, then (I see no need to exclude his more extensive prose texts from this category, given their basic features of conciseness and internal complexity) is his ability to balance competing, seemingly contradictory paradigms. As he himself put it in his online interview with Brett Cross and Scott Hamilton: ‘I see no contradiction between classicism and postmodernism.’ In both cases, the fact of having to live in a state of indeterminacy is the key.

Through no fault of their own, most Classical authors have come down to us in fragments – some so fragmentary and gnomic as to be virtually meaningless. Through no real fault of our own, in the late-modern world the stabilities of cultural norms and the unitary self have deserted us. Jenner’s is, accordingly, a less than epic vision: not a Platonic “spume that plays / Upon a ghostly paradigm of things” (Yeats 1973, 445). It’s more like the world envisaged by contemporary physics: a series of necessary impossibilities, transcending traditional notions of time and place, taking place at a level unreachable by our senses.

For Jenner, this cosmos of quantum mechanics is not only compatible but necessary to account for the continued potency of these relics of our Classical past. Who would have thought that the half-life of Sappho’s fragments would be so long? That they would still be glowing in the dark at this distance in time? Their very indeterminacy is, it seems, their strength. Whether we see them simply as an elegant metaphor for our contemporary reality, or the literal means of its creation, we’re forced to come back to them again and again, as they rebuild themselves link by link from the garbage-dumps of Egypt.

The Classics are back; so much is clear. One could deduce as much simply from the renewed popularity of Classical studies in our High School curricula. But it’s more than that. Poets as diverse as Anne Carson and Michael Harlow (who supplied a blurb for Jenner’s book) appear to be drawing fresh sustenance from the detail, the letter of these ancient texts. It’s no longer enough (pace Lowell, Baxter, Stead) to read them simply as sexy and unashamed. Ted Jenner in particular has shown us that a life unexamined in the light of these snippets of our past is not worth living – that Homer and Virgil (and Plato, particularly) – may now have to take a back seat to Sappho, Herakleitos – and Ibykos.

Works Cited:
  • Baxter, James K. Runes. 1973. Auckland: Oxford UP, 1974.
  • Cross, Brett, and Scott Hamilton. ‘Ted Jenner Speaks Out.’ Online interview. http://www.archive.org/details/TedJennerSpeaksOut (2 May 2009).
  • Eliot, T.S. The Waste Land: A Facsimile and Transcript of the Original Drafts, including the Annotations of Ezra Pound. Ed. Valerie Eliot. 1971. London: Faber, 1980.
  • Hamilton, Scott. ‘For Heraclitus, against Plato and Bush.’ Reading the Maps (29 April 2009)
  • Jenner, Ted. A Memorial Brass. Eastbourne: Hawk, 1980.
  • Jenner, Ted. ‘Progress Report on an Annotated Checklist for a Motuihe Island Gazetteer of Ethnographical Topology and Comparative Onomatography.’ In The New Fiction. Ed. Michael Morrissey. Auckland: Lindon, 1985. 182-90.
  • Jenner, Ted. Dedications. Auckland: Omphalos, 1991.
  • Jenner, Ted. The Love-Songs of Ibykos: 22 Fragments. Auckland: Holloway, 1997.
  • Jenner, Ted. Sappho Triptych. Auckland: Puriri, 2007.
  • Jenner, Ted. Writers in Residence and Other Captive Fauna. Auckland: Titus, 2009.
  • Pound, Ezra. Collected Shorter Poems. 1949. London: Faber, 1984.
  • Stead, C.K. Collected Poems. Auckland: Auckland UP, 2008.
  • Yeats, W.B. The Variorum Edition of the Poems of W.B. Yeats. Ed. Peter Allt and Russell K. Alspach. 1957. New York: Macmillan, 1973.


(2009)

Ka Mate Ka Ora 8 (September, 2009): 46-66.
[Available at: http://www.nzepc.auckland.ac.nz/kmko/08/ka_mate08_ross.asp]

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Ka Mate Ka Ora 8 (2009)






Saturday

Travelling to the Edge of Oneself (2009)




Jen Crawford, ed.: brief 38 (September 2009)

Travelling to the Edge of Oneself


Martin Edmond. The Supply Party: Ludwig Becker on the Burke and Wills Expedition. Adelaide, SA: East Street Publications, 2009. ISBN 978-1-921037-26-9. 209 pp.



Martin Edmond: The Supply Party (2009)


Outside in the rookery, an extraordinary cacophony and excitement of birds, mostly … ibis, was going on. … Ibis are elegant birds and they inevitably remind me of ancient Egypt, where the ibis-headed Thoth, inventor of writing, scribe of the gods, fount of all knowledge, recorded the confessions and affirmations of the dead on his scrolls, along with the list of who went to paradise and who was to be eaten by the gods of judgement. On the other hand, in a rookery they are scrappy, quarrelsome, raucous and somehow lacking the elegance, and often even the whiteness that they possess in their ideal form. On the wing they immediately recover their grace and splendour and then it is easy to see that they are an archaic bird, thought to have descended from that flying dinosaur, the pterodactyl. [63-64]

All that from a flock of birds!

I guess the reason this passage struck me so forcibly as I was making my way through Martin Edmond’s latest, The Supply Party, a combination travel-book, biographical-exploration of Ludwig Becker, official artist and naturalist on the ill-fated Burke and Wills expedition, was because it seems to encapsulate his method in a nutshell.

On the one hand there’s the close observation: Martin notes carefully and accurately the behaviour of the actual flock of ibis he’s observing from a nearby hide. On the other hand there’s the ever-present association of ideas: Ibis recall Thoth, the ibis-headed god, and thus we go down and interesting byway into Egyptian mythology for a short while. Finally there’s the assiduous research: Ibis, archaic birds, “thought to have descended from that flying dinosaur, the pterodactyl.”

I guess there are dangers to this approach. If you like constant mythological and historical parallels to the business in hand, this is the book for you. Martin is an elegant anecdotalist and a supremely well-informed guide. His contacts with the actual people he meets along the way tend to be significantly more truncated, though.

There’s the “sullen red-headed teenage girl” serving behind the counter of a Queensland roadhouse, who looks so incredulous at the idea of anyone wanting salad with their burger [160-61]; more poignantly, there’s the bewildered young ex-veteran in the souvenir shop who says, “with feeling, as if it were a line from a song: I’ll never wear green again” [130]; then there’s the woman in the hotel in Menindee, Noeline, who replies to his request for a room, “Sure you don’t mean the motel across the road?” [94]; there’s even that crooked-toothed drinker in the bar who dials a wrong number “very slowly, looking at his bit of paper, looking at the numbers on the phone, punching a button, looking back at his bit of paper,” as if he couldn’t read, only to hang his head in shame and shamble away when he realised “re-dialling was beyond him” [98]. Most striking of all, perhaps, there’s the well-dressed Aboriginal woman in Cunnamulla to whom Martin never succeeds in speaking at all: “We were only a metre or two apart but the space between us was vast and unknown, perhaps unknowable. I couldn’t catch her eye” [183].

Again and again Martin reveals that he’s happier sitting on the porch with a book than chatting inconsequentially with the locals: “Next door was a low, old dining room with spider-haunted mud-brick walls. I peered briefly in but it seemed better to eat outside.” [161] He even jokes about it once or twice:
It never stops, he said, humorously. It just never bloody stops, does it?
No, I agreed, without the slightest idea of what he was talking about. Walking back into the hotel compound, I realised I must have entered the Laconic Zone. [69]

His true feelings seem to me to come out more straightforwardly (laconically?) later on: “It’s a peculiarity of outback towns, that, as soon as you leave them, it is as if they have never been.” [105]

So why go there at all? What is there in this curious car-journey approximately in his tracks that succeeds in bringing Martin closer to his elusive subject, Ludwig Becker?

Again and again Martin stresses the accuracy of Becker’s observations, the fact that one can identify places, flora and fauna, people even, from his precise and elegant sketches and finished watercolours (the one exception, the tick he discovered in the arm-pit of a gecko at Minindie, remains unknown to science because, although he used a magnifying glass “to make the enlarged version .. the magnification was not sufficient to allow him to detail those features that would allow a specific identification to be made. He was working … at the limits of vision.” [177]).

And yet, there something more to Becker’s art – something hard to put one’s finger on, but nevertheless palpably there behind his apparently so-dispassionate technique: “ a vastness that is beyond mere possession by the eye” [179]. Thus his painting of a comet is hard to see except as a nativity scene, the crouching camels in the immeasurable night; his views of distant plains, too, have a tendency to play strange tricks with perception and scale. An air of the Romantic movement, of Coleridge’s “habituation to the VAST,” of the visionary landscapes of Kasper David Friedrich (his Art teacher’s teacher), seems inextricably bound up with Becker’s concept of himself as a man of science.

Might the same be said of Martin Edmond, his biographer, his shadow? Certainly. Unquestionably. There’s the lovely passage where Martin speculates that the creatures in the Australian bush, “from their long association with humans, somehow miss us when we’re not around and celebrate if we return, even if only for a night or two:”
I know this is an impossibly romantic position to take and probably untenable. I only mention it because I’ve never quite been able to shake the feeling that it is so. [134].

Novalis could hardly have expressed more succinctly his own sense of the living, breathing cosmos that we all inhabit – in mutual brotherhood or enmity.

Martin’s is a strangely melancholy book. But then, perhaps that’s not so strange. It is, after all, a funeral elegy for a man who died on a futile, mismanaged quest for something that hardly mattered in itself – Victoria’s attempt to claim as much northern territory as possible before the pushy young State of South Australia could do the same. And the gloom associated with this waste of men and materials hangs over the story more and more:
I wasn’t sure if I wanted to stand before another grave. I though perhaps I’d had enough of mortuary emotions. [148]

In the end, in fact, Martin fails even to find his ostensible subject’s final resting-place:
Having come so far, with the goal in sight, why would I turn away now? Did I not want to stand at the grave site after all? Perhaps, although I didn’t think this at the time, I was trying to align myself with all the other non-events: Burke and Wills never saw the sea at Carpentaria .. Wright never reached Cooper’s Creek with the supply party, Brahe wasn’t there when those he’d waited four months for finally came back …. Even Becker was absent from his own death. [167]

A rationalisation? Or the simple truth? Standing by Becker’s grave was never going to bring Martin the closure that he needed, the definition and the distance to evaluate his own quest. On the one hand, clearly, it was an attempt to understand Becker by emulating him. The Supply Party, then, becomes the rhetorical equivalent of Becker’s own sketchbook of the expedition: partial, unfinished, ostensibly compiled for the purposes of advancing knowledge, but actually full of mystical insights and visionary depth.

Martin’s, too, is a vision-quest, conducted under the aegis of totem animals: ibis, snakes, eagles – even the ubiquitous, omnipresent flies – and it seems designed more to tell him about himself than to provide us with a biography of Ludwig Becker. His account of Becker’s last days casts, significantly, the artist as Don Quixote, his exasperated doppelgänger Beckler as a kind of Sancho Panza, reluctantly tending to his companion’s needs whilst backbiting him under his breath:
Propping up his bloated body on some old camel bags, he [Becker] sought to make himself independent of all external influences by studying, writing and sketching [175].

Beckler’s bluntly-expressed scorn for his older countryman Becker’s scholarly preoccupations in the midst of such extreme adversity and want prompts Martin to dissent – to see, on the contrary, in this mantra, studying, writing and sketching, a kind of panacea for the woes of the world.

Which of them was right? Who can say, even at this distance in time? It would be naïve to claim that Martin doesn’t see the justice in Beckler’s workaday view of the world. He did, after all, survive to tell the tale, unlike his more spiritual companion. The Supply Party, then, might be seen as Martin’s own personal Pilgrim’s Progress – equivocal where Bunyan is most direct, but every bit as serious in the final analysis. Or, if you prefer, it might be possible to see in that splendid, luminous apotheosis of the dying Becker succeeding in making himself “independent of all external influences by studying, writing and sketching” something of the luminous yet simple practicality of Voltaire’s advice (in Candide) to “cultivate your garden.”

Either way this is an intensely thought-provoking book, one which doesn’t reveal all it’s got to say on the surface, but one which richly repays perseverance. A simple travel narrative it’s not – but then, which of the great travel books can claim to be simple?

On one level, then, it’s a kind of love-letter to the Australian landscape to match Martin’s earlier evocations of New Zealand’s central plateau in Waimarino County & Other Excursions (2007); on another, it’s a splendid addition to Burke-&-Willsiana along the lines of his contribution to the Ern Malley mythos in White City and its associated works. Finally, though, it’s its own book: an account of travelling to the edge of oneself, and a partial inventory of what can be brought back from the journey.


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brief 38 (2009)






Friday

The Tolkien Industry (2009)



Jeremy Rose, ed.: Scooop Review of Books

The Tolkien Industry




For quite some time now I've been meditating an essay on the literary estate of J. R. R. Tolkien. I don't know if I'll ever actually get round to it, though, so I thought I might just put a few of the highlights into a blog post instead.

There's a story (told by C. S. Lewis's literary executor, the egregious Rev - now Fr. - Walter Hooper) that Tolkien once remarked scoffingly to him that his friend Lewis had published almost twice as many books since his death as he'd managed to put out before it! I'm afraid that story rings a little hollow now. The dozen or so books that appeared before Tolkien's own death in 1973 have long since been dwarfed by the ones that have appeared (and continue to appear) ever since.

You don't believe me? Take a look at these two lists, then tell me if there's anything substantial that I'm missing:


Major works published during Tolkien's lifetime:

  1. Tolkien, J. R. R., & E. V. Gordon, ed. Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. 1925. Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1963.

  2. Tolkien, J. R. R. The Hobbit, or There and Back Again. Illustrated by the Author. 1937. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1975.

  3. Tolkien, J. R. R. Farmer Giles of Ham. Illustrated by Pauline Baynes. 1949. London & Boston: George Allen and Unwin & Houghton and Mifflin, 1973.

  4. Tolkien, J. R. R. The Fellowship of the Ring, Being the First Part of the Lord of the Rings. 1954. London & Boston: George Allen and Unwin & Houghton Mifflin, 1961.

  5. Tolkien, J. R. R. The Two Towers, Being the Second Part of the Lord of the Rings. 1954. London & Boston: George Allen and Unwin & Houghton Mifflin, 1961.

  6. Tolkien, J. R. R. The Return of the King, Being the Third Part of the Lord of the Rings. 1955. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1957.

  7. Tolkien, J. R. R. The Lord of the Rings. 1954, 1954, 1955. Revised 2nd edition. 1966. London: HarperCollins, 2001.

  8. Tolkien, J. R. R. The Adventures of Tom Bombadil and other verses from the Red Book. Illustrated by Pauline Baynes. 1961. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1974.

  9. Tolkien, J. R. R. Tree and Leaf [incorporating the story "Leaf by Niggle" (1947) and the essay "On Fairy-stories" (1939)]. 1964. London: Unwin Books, 1973.

  10. Tolkien, J. R. R. “The Homecoming of Beorhtnoth Beorhthelm’s Son.” In The Tolkien Reader. 1949, 1953, 1962, 1964. Cover illustration by Pauline Baynes. New York: Ballantine Books, 1966.

  11. Tolkien, J. R. R. Smith of Wootton Major. Illustrated by Pauline Baynes. 1967. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1974.

  12. Tolkien, J. R. R., & Donald Swann. The Road Goes Ever On: A Song Cycle. Decorations by J. R. R. Tolkien. 1968. London: George Allen & Unwin Ltd., 1974.


[J. R. R. Tolkien (1892-1973)]

I haven't included any of his prefaces to other people's editions & translations of Old English texts, or his separate periodical publications, but otherwise that should be a reasonably comprehensive list (I've put in details of my own copy of each book after the original date of publication).


Major works published posthumously:

  1. Tolkien, J. R. R., trans. Sir Gawain and the Green Knight; Pearl; Sir Orfeo. Ed. Christopher Tolkien. 1975. London: Unwin Paperbacks, 1981.

  2. Tolkien, J. R. R. The Father Christmas Letters. Ed Baillie Tolkien. 1976. London: Unwin Paperbacks, 1978.

  3. Tolkien, J. R. R. The Silmarillion. Ed. Christopher Tolkien. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1977.

  4. Tolkien, J. R. R. Pictures. Ed. Christopher Tolkien. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1979.

  5. Tolkien, J. R. R. Unfinished Tales of Númenor and Middle-earth. Ed. Christopher Tolkien. 1980. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1981.

  6. Tolkien, J. R. R. Letters. Ed. Humphrey Carpenter & Christopher Tolkien. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1981.

  7. Tolkien, J. R. R. Finn and Hengest: The Fragment and the Episode. Ed. Alan Bliss. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1982.

  8. Tolkien, J. R. R. Mr. Bliss. London: George Allen & Unwin Paperbacks, 1982.

  9. Tolkien, J. R. R. The Monsters and the Critics and Other Essays. Ed. Christopher Tolkien. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1983.

  10. Christopher Tolkien. The History of Middle-earth. 12 vols. London & Boston, 1983-96:
    1. The Book of Lost Tales, Part One. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1983.
    2. The Book of Lost Tales, Part Two. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1984.
    3. The Lays of Beleriand. London: George Allen & Unwin, 1985.
    4. The Shaping of Middle-earth: The Quenta, the Ambarkanta and the Annals together with the earliest ‘Silmarillion’and the first Map. London: Guild Publishing, 1986.
    5. The Lost Road and Other Writings: Language and Legend before ‘The Lord of the Rings’. London: Unwin Hyman, 1987.
    6. The Return of the Shadow: The History of the Lord of the Rings, Part One. London: Unwin Hyman, 1988.
    7. The Treason of Isengard: The History of the Lord of the Rings, Part Two. London: Unwin Hyman, 1989.
    8. The War of the Ring: The History of the Lord of the Rings, Part Three. London: Unwin Hyman, 1990.
    9. Sauron Defeated: The End of the Third Age (The History of the Lord of the Rings, Part Four); The Notion Club Papers and The Drowning of Anadûnê. London: HarperCollins, 1992.
    10. Morgoth’s Ring: The Later Silmarillion, Part One, The Legends of Aman. London: HarperCollins, 1993.
    11. The War of the Jewels: The Later Silmarillion, Part One, The Legends of Beleriand. London: HarperCollins, 1994.
    12. The Peoples of Middle-earth. Boston: Houghton Mifflin, 1996.

  11. Tolkien, J. R. R.. The Annotated Hobbit: The Hobbit, or There and Back Again. 1937. Ed. Douglas A. Anderson. London: Unwin Hyman, 1988.

  12. Tolkien, J. R. R. Tree and Leaf. 1964. Second edition, including the poem ‘Mythopoeia’. Ed. Christopher Tolkien. London: Unwin Paperbacks, 1988.

  13. Tolkien, J. R. R. Bilbo’s Last Song. Illustrated by Pauline Baynes. London: Unwin Hyman, 1990.

  14. Tolkien, J. R. R. Roverandom. Ed. Christina Scull & Wayne G. Hammond. London: HarperCollins, 1995.

  15. Tolkien, J. R. R. Narn I Chîn Húrin: The Tale of the Children of Húrin. Ed. Christopher Tolkien. Illustrated by Alan Lee. London: HarperCollins, 2007.

  16. John D. Rateliff. The History of The Hobbit. 2 vols. London & Boston, 2007:
    1. Part One: Mr. Baggins. 2007. London: HarperCollins, 2008.
    2. Part Two: Return to Bag-End. 2007. London: HarperCollins, 2008.

  17. Tolkien, J. R. R. The Legend of Sigurd and Gudrún. Ed. Christopher Tolkien. London: HarperCollins, 2009.


[J. R. R. Tolkien: The Children of Hurin, ed. Christopher Tolkien (2007)]


Now don't get me wrong. The last thing I want is to be a wowser about what is, in essence, harmless fun. The very fact that I have first editions of most of these books should tell you that I bought them the moment they came out. What's more, I've read them all pretty attentively (with the exception of the last one listed above, which I'm working my way through right now). I am, in short, as big a Tolkienophile as you're likely to find.

That mention of "first editions" brings me to the first part of my gripe, though. By all means get Tolkien's unpublished work out into the public domain, but does it have to be done quite so slowly, and with quite such maniacal academic attention to manuscripts and warring textual traditions? He has been dead for 36 years , after all. Why don't we (yet) have accessible editions of long poems such as "The Lay of Aotrou and Itroun" (1945) or "Imram" (1955), published in periodicals during his lifetime? Why is the (fascinating) “Homecoming of Beorhtnoth Beorhthelm’s Son” relegated to old paperbacks such as the Ballantine (US) Tolkien Reader (1966), or the combined Unwin (UK) reprint of Tree and Leaf & Smith of Wootton Major together with other miscellanea (1975)?

These things take time. I quite see that. And Christopher Tolkien, the main actor in the drama of Tolkien's "posthumous productivity," was himself a teacher of Old English and Old Norse at Oxford before he retired to take on the editing of his father's archives fulltime. It's a positively Victorian tale of filial devotion and of following in one's father's footsteps. Or is it? More on that subject later.

I guess it's the plethora of "second, expanded editions" which really bugs me most. There's now a second, expanded edition [s.e.e. for short] of The Silmarillion (1977 / 1992), an s.e.e. of the Pictures by J. R. R. Tolkien (1979 / transformed into J.R.R.Tolkien: Artist and Illustrator, ed. Wayne G. Hammond & Christina Scull (1995)), an s.e.e. of the Letters (1981 / 2000), an s.e.e. of Tree and Leaf (1964 / 1988) [not to mention a special annotated reprint of all the variant versions of the essay "on Fairy-stories" edited by a couple of American academics (2008)], an s.e.e. of The Annotated Hobbit (ed. Douglas A. Anderson, 1988 / 2002), even - for the love of Mike - an s.e.e. of the infantile (but entertaining) Father Christmas Letters (1976 /2004) ! Not to mention a special facsimile edition of the children's picture book Mr. Bliss (1982 / 2007). What's a poor collector to do? A poor completist collector, that is.

But then maybe collectors don't deserve any special attention. Maybe they ought to be taunted with endless variant versions of the same basic cycle of works. That may very well be. But the trouble is that many of these s.e.e.'s contain vital extra information which greatly influences one's reading of the texts themselves.

Of course it's a traditional publisher's ploy to multiply "revised" and "definitive" editions in this way in order to renew the copyright on works which would otherwise gradually fall away from notice. And in the case of an author with as many die-hard fans as Tolkien, this is clearly a multi-million dollar undertaking. But I can't help feeling that it shows a certain lack of consideration for readers, which is part and parcel of the second section of my complaint.

I suppose I'm also a natural inhabitant of the fantasy world of absurdly complicated and circumstantial annotations and elucidations of essentially frivolous popular texts. Sherlock Holmes is , of course, the classic case. Ever since Fr. Ronald Knox invented what he referred to as the "higher criticism" - writing essays about the Holmes canon which assumed as a basic convention the actual existence of its central characters, and the subordinate role of Arthur Conan Doyle as Dr. Watson's literary agent - a great many people have found a good deal of entertainment in exploring such dilemmas as the "two (or three) Watsons" problem (originating from the fact that Watson's first name seems to shift from John H. to James Watson as the canon unfolds).

Perhaps (as someone else suggested) the latter name was Mrs Watson's pet-name version of "Hamish," one of the possible candidates for the good doctor's middle name ... But then there's the question of how many wives Dr. Watson actually had? Or the heraldry and antecedents of the name "Holmes"? Or exactly which continents are included in Watson's boast of "an experience of women which extends over many nations and three separate continents" ...? You get the general idea. The Bible of these maniacal speculators is the monumental Annotated Sherlock Holmes (arranged in an eccentric "chronological order" of his own devising) of the late lamented William S. Baring Gould (1967).

Now Holmesian (UK) - or "Sherlockian" (US) - "higher criticism" is an essentially tongue-in-cheek affair, conducted by learned, but frivolous-minded sages such as Christopher Morley, Dorothy L. Sayers and Vincent Starrett (for more, far more, see the wikipedia article on Holmesian speculation). The original impulse was, presumably, to parody the ponderous Germanic Biblical criticism of the nineteenth century, with its love of multiple authors, contaminated textual traditions, and teasing remnants of ancient solar myths behind the superficial trapperies of the Yahweh cult.

Tolkien criticism has, it seems to me, taken another, darker path. The fact that Tolkien was himself a professor of Anglo-Saxon, and loved to mix in elements (particularly linguistic ones) from his professional field, has led to a mass of learned (and pseudo-learned) commentary on the intricate relationships between the two.

So far so good. Old English scholars such as Tom Shippey, in his excellent The Road to Middle-Earth (1982) and subsequent related works, has illuminated Tolkien's practice in this respect with a certain restrained aplomb.

But when it comes to treating Tolkien's own works as a kind of holy writ, requiring endless revision and recasting to fit ever more recondite revelations about the topography and chronology of his imagined Dreamland, I fear that the same could not be claimed of compilations such as Christopher Tolkien's monumental (and monumentally frustrating) 12-volume History of Middle-earth (1983-96). Here all proportion has been lost. Speculations worthy of the fantasy-world of Sherlock Holmesian higher criticism are woven into the actual detail of the evolution of a group of revoltingly-cloying Edwardian fairy tales (The Book of Lost Tales) into the ever-vaster heroic canvas of the unfinished (and unfinishable?) Silmarillion, issued in a clipped and stilted version shortly after its author's death by Christopher himself.

Christopher's own saga, developing in his father's image from a downtrodden and disillusioned soldier in World War II (his father, a veteran of the trenches of the First World War, claimed in a letter that he might best regard himself as a "hobbit among the Uruk-hai"), to a professional scholar in his father's own discipline of Germanic philology, to an accomplished translator (the Saga of King Heidrek the Wise (1960): a work of deep erudition and poetic value in its own right), to a fierce guardian of his father's literary legacy (and an influential critic of Peter jackson's films), deserves retelling on a larger scale sometime. He is clearly a man of great talent, and considerable scholarly expertise. I would say that his work on editing the manuscript versions of The Lord of the Rings (in particular) might be thought to justify that immense 12-volume history by itself. It's certainly (by far) the most interesting section to read. But it does constitute only three and a bit volumes of the whole tottering edifice.

His most noticeable legacy, unfortunately, seems to be a ragtag and bobtail (to use a Tolkienian term) of mostly American scholars who specialise in ever more recondite and fatuous explorations of the implications of the papers and manuscripts which Tolkien himself sold them so long ago. Is a two-volume History of the Hobbit really necessary, for instance? Especially on top of Douglas A. Anderson's magnificently-illustrated (and basically light-hearted) Annotated Hobbit of 1988 [s.e.e. 2002]?

[John D. Rateliff: The History of the Hobbit (2007)]

The History of the Hobbit is fun to read, mind you. I enjoyed it greatly. But it's not as much fun as it should be. Because it's 900 pages long. Because it's immensely repetitive and overly detailed on points of no consequence. Because its author, John D. Rateliff, has no sense of proportion. Because its publishers know that anything with Tolkien's name on the spine will sell in gazillions (take the recent reprint of parts of Unfinished tales under the stand-alone title of The Tale of the Children of Húrin, for instance). Rateliff, alas, is no Christopher Tolkien.

In summary, then, I think the Tolkien industry began pretty well, with solid editions of his principal unpublished works, and handsome new reprints of the others. Right now, though, it threatens to be swallowed up by its own insane momentum, a victim of its own success. The Holmesian "higher criticism", too, had its rise and fall. There have been few worthy successors to such masterworks as Starrett's The Private Life of Sherlock Holmes (1933), or Baring Gould's Sherlock Holmes of Baker Street: A Life of the World's First Consulting Detective (1962) or even such jeux d'esprits as Nicholas Meyer's The Seven Percent Solution (1974).

Why do we no longer see works of the calibre of Barbara Strachey's delightful Journeys of Frodo: An Atlas of J. R. R. Tolkien’s The Lord of the Rings (1981), or Karen Fonstadt's Atlas of Middle-earth (1981 / s.e.e. 2001), in the (potentially) far less circumscribed (one would have thought) field of Tolkienian "higher criticism"? There are certainly exceptions. John Garth's Tolkien and the Great War: The Threshold of Middle-earth (2003) was a valuable successor to Humphrey Carpenter's 1977 biography and its even more interesting sequel The Inklings: C. S. Lewis, J. R. R. Tolkien, Charles Williams and Their Friends (1978). For the most part, though, what we tend to see now are compendiums of essays by ghastly Academic second-raters, dictionaries and grammars of Tolkien's various made-up languages, and other ever more po-faced and dreary reponses to the simple delights of Tolkien's Hobbit and Lord of the Rings.

I remember my PhD supervisor at Edinburgh, Mr. Colin Manlove, author of a number of critical books on Modern Fantasy, remarking of the appearance of yet another volume of posthumous gleanings in the (then) seemingly-interminable History of Middle-earth, that he was beginning to wonder if they were coming through from spirit messages. At the time I suspected he was just too lazy to read any of them, but as the years go by and the works keep on mounting up, I begin to wonder if he didn't have a point.

This is, I have to say, starting to resemble more and more a publisher's production-line (the shady kind who commission obscure hacks to produce works "in the manner of" V. C. Andrews or Alistair Maclean) rather than a bona-fide attempt to do justice to J. R. R. Tolkien's admittedly impressive literary productivity.

I'm reminded of some remarks made by the young Henry James, in an 1872 review of a volume of Nathaniel Hawthorne's French and Italian Note-Books, edited by his own son (and literary executor) Julian:

Mr. Hawthorne is having a posthumous productivity almost as active as that of his lifetime. Six volumes have been compounded from his private journals, an unfinished romance is doing duty as a “serial,” and a number of his letters, with other personal memorials, have been given to the world. These liberal excisions from the privacy of so reserved and shade-seeking a genius suggest forcibly the general question of the proper limits of curiosity as to that passive personality of an artist of which the elements are scattered in portfolios and table-drawers. It is becoming very plain, however, that whatever the proper limits may be, the actual limits will be fixed only by a total exhaustion of matter.

[Henry James, Literary Criticism: Essays on Literature, American Writers, English Writers, ed. Leon Edel and Mark Wilson (New York: The Library of America, 1984) 307.]

With a few minor variations, the same passage might serve equally well to characterise the even more impressive “posthumous productivity” of the almost-comparably "reserved and shade-seeking genius" J. R. R. Tolkien.

James, characteristically, saw the issue as centring on the proper limits of curiosity about the private life of an artist - a theme treated in more depth in stories such as “The Aspern Papers” (1888) or "The Private Life" (1891). As he went on to remark, the principal result of Hawthorne's executor's filial labours has been that “critics, psychologists, and gossip-mongers” have been left free to “glean amid the stubble.” Is that what Hawthorne (or Tolkien) would really have wanted? Almost certainly not.

Many of his contemporaries were deeply shocked to read what the comparatively short-lived Hawthorne had had to say about them in what he must have regarded as the safe repository of his private journal. The revelations in Tolkien's papers are not of so scandalous an order, but there can be little doubt that many reams of indifferent verse would have been consigned to the fire if he'd known they'd eventually be coming out in immense annotated editions, with their imperfections made glaringly and cringe-makingly apparent.

What's certain is that, "whatever the proper limits may be, the actual limits will be fixed only by a total exhaustion of matter." Not even the death of Christopher can halt it now. His father's legacy has long since fallen into the burning cancerous hands of the Adversary [the professional Anglo-American Academic establishment], and from that dark Mordor there is, I fear, no escape.

All we can do (I suppose) is welcome any light that has been cast on the works written in his lifetime, and try and draw a decent veil over any that should really never have seen the light of day.







Jack Ross teaches English Literature at the Albany branch of Massey University. He is one of New Zealand’s leading literary critics, as well as a poet, novelist, short story writer and translator. Visit his blog at http://mairangibay.blogspot.com.


(24/5/09)


Scoop Review of Books (16/6/09)
[Reprinted from: The Imaginary Museum (24/5/09)]

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